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by KittyMeowMaxwell

schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Has it really been six years?

And after all this time, this still remains one of my all-time favorite stories. I just finished reading it again, and it's as good as I remembered.

One thing, though -- One of you might want to go back and touch-up the formatting. It's gone a bit wonky. D:
person Ranwed
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I laughed my heart out and then I cried my heart out.


I absolutely adore the authors notes beginning every chapter, LMAO.
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm REALLY glad I happened across this. Wow.
This is, like, an alltime favorite of mine now. XDD
I can't believe I read it all straight through.
...I like to point out random things I REALLY enjoyed[lol]:
I LOVE this evil, manipulative, lying Squall. I've never actually read him like that before... He'd make a GREAT villian!
...'Forming peaks' is indeed, the stupidest baking directive EVER.
I sort of wish Squally would've ended up happy, too... but I appreciate that the story didn't go offtrack for that to happen, especially since he was all evil. XDD To be completely honest. I think I love Squall so much in this because he acts the same way I did with my wife before she broke down and agreed to go out with me. XDDD

Thanks for writing this.
I had a great time reading this, and it's wonderfully done.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T_T.
I LOVE this story.
For some reason. Irvine crying is just SO cute to me. I'd never imagined it before. And I LOVE Zell and Seifer working together!!!
[::is only on chapter 7.:: I can't wait to finish!]
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::apologies for the million fangirl-esque reviews i'll probably leave.::
Just wanted to comment that I LOVE Selphie in this, too! [drives me crazy how everyone goes out of thier way to make her seem annoying. ><]
But you've really captured her adorableness well. ^^
person David Heaps
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why do you hate Squall so much T_T Making him all evil and stalky like. Poor Squall.
person David Heaps
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY SWEET JESUS! I just read chapter 43 and i think i just did something that wasn't pee in my pants :O! Your storie is GREAT!
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not long ago, I somehow managed to read just about everything in FF7 that caught my attention. Being a quick reader and having too much free time means good stories are devoured quickly - sometimes /too/ quickly. So, out of boredom, I looked for something nice and long, and Lightning caught my eye.

I've never played FF8, so I know very little of the actual plot or characters. I'd been trying to avoid stories in that area for that reason. I'm VERY glad I gave in, though.

This is a marvelous story. The way the characters are portrayed, and the relationships between them all are excellent. As soon as I was done with the last chapter, I sat down and read the whole thing again almost immediately because I couldn't get enough of it. I'm kinda disappointed that you reached the end - but it's such a perfect ending that I really don't mind.

Thank you guys for giving us such a marvelous story to entertain ourselves with!

~SneakyOne
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaahhhhhhh! It's over! And it was so gooood to. Eagerly awaiting your next effort!
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what happened to the real chapter 55 (in which zell must be dreaming)? i read it on ff.net but when i went to see it on here it wasn't there. it went to this chapter. :(

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