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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* awww what a beautiful storyline T____T! I love it!!! Cloud and Vincent are SO perfect in your story! You are an amazing author, please keep up the good work!!
I especially love their thoughts, both oh so lonely.... and that both of them think that their relationship is like a "forbidden fruit".... I think it's very very romantic ;__; ...and Clouds sickness - I hope he will be cured T___T I absolutely don't want him to let poor Vin alone! Please, let Cloud be cured of Geostigma, like in the movie!
*both thumbs up* I'm SO looking forward to the future chapters!!! =^___^=
I especially love their thoughts, both oh so lonely.... and that both of them think that their relationship is like a "forbidden fruit".... I think it's very very romantic ;__; ...and Clouds sickness - I hope he will be cured T___T I absolutely don't want him to let poor Vin alone! Please, let Cloud be cured of Geostigma, like in the movie!
*both thumbs up* I'm SO looking forward to the future chapters!!! =^___^=
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Poor Cloud and Vincent. grr on jenova and her poisonus cells.
Again another very well written chapter.
Keep up the good work!
=^_^=
Again another very well written chapter.
Keep up the good work!
=^_^=
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They are so... sweet together (I don't think that's the right word, but its the best I have for now) Great chapter, I'm definitly hooked, I don't find many stories that I follow so avidly. I love Vincent and Cloud, they are so good together in this story ^_^ Thanks for another great chapter!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww! That's sooo kewt!
And I remember the Honeybee Inn, and all the crud you had to do to get the GOOD items. *shudders*
And then that rather athletic man, *snickers* poor Cloud.
I'd have been scarred for life!
=^_^=
Great work! Very nice chapter.
And I remember the Honeybee Inn, and all the crud you had to do to get the GOOD items. *shudders*
And then that rather athletic man, *snickers* poor Cloud.
I'd have been scarred for life!
=^_^=
Great work! Very nice chapter.
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAWWWWWW! I love this fic and that last scene was sooooooo cute! PLEASE continue as soon as possible!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Shmex and the morning after!
I don't think they're OOC, I think you're doing a great job!
=^_^=
I don't think they're OOC, I think you're doing a great job!
=^_^=
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what happens. Marlene was so cute... I thought so from the movie too... I sighed and gave an 'aww' when she ran toward Vincent. This chapter made me do the same thing ^_^ Again, great job! I'm definitely a fan now!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^o^ WOW! Such beautiful writing. You are truly a great author. Wonderful story, I couldn't stop reading! I can't wait for more! ^_^
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally love this fic. I can't wait for more. :)
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been meaning to review this since yesterday, and I never quite got the chance. ^^;;
Well, by all means, continue. I think this fic is wonderful, and displays such a realistic, believable, and intelligent understanding of a relationship between two men like Cloud and Vincent that I think many readers became disinterested. That's a compliment, btw. ^^; What I'm trying to say it, your story seems to be at a more professional level, with a deeper meaning and understanding, and, because it isn't immediately gratifying to the stereotyped yaoi reader, you haven't gotten much feedback. I'd just like to say that I think this is absolutely beautiful, a divine and artistic piece of work with a broad understanding to such a seemingly narrow subject. It's aesthetic and beautiful, and I hope you post more soon.
*Tries to explain more how much she loves this, but can't.* ^^; I hope you understand. I'm just breathtaken.
~Squalmasy
Well, by all means, continue. I think this fic is wonderful, and displays such a realistic, believable, and intelligent understanding of a relationship between two men like Cloud and Vincent that I think many readers became disinterested. That's a compliment, btw. ^^; What I'm trying to say it, your story seems to be at a more professional level, with a deeper meaning and understanding, and, because it isn't immediately gratifying to the stereotyped yaoi reader, you haven't gotten much feedback. I'd just like to say that I think this is absolutely beautiful, a divine and artistic piece of work with a broad understanding to such a seemingly narrow subject. It's aesthetic and beautiful, and I hope you post more soon.
*Tries to explain more how much she loves this, but can't.* ^^; I hope you understand. I'm just breathtaken.
~Squalmasy