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by Jamaica

person Nickana
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please!!! will you continue this amazing, great, terrific, brilliant story (puppy eyes and pleading voice)I dont know what else to say, your story its the best I've read in long , long time,and also your web its great and... to many more things... maybe its to late but if its not update something for the sake of many people,please?
person FoxDragon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Now bring me prisoner 24601, your time is up and your parol's begun..." Gods I love Les Miserables. ^_^ And after putting off reading this fic for a while (not a huge Vin/Cloud fan) I finally get off my duff and read it. And now I want more! I was surprised by how much I enjoyed it, even if it is steeped in religiouse overtones. Although I love the fact that the boys are citing christian prayers, right before screwing each other. Yea, I know, I'm evil and I hat organized religeon. Or did you just copy the prayer from Boondock Saints? Either way, it was chuckle-worthy.
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! All the unbridled emotions...gives me shivers! I can't wait to see what happens...please continue!
person noone
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhh, so thats what the tatoo is for. So, Rude was the one in the fight bar, and reno was the one who stupidly tried to pickpocket him? and the others were found in prison? Eek! poor Vincent! He didn't deserve such a thing, wow, so this means he's only in his ealry 20's right? Anyways, Sephiroth is being a jerk, I really like how you depict Zack in here (he's so nice), and I hope that Cloud and Vincent make it through whatever is going to happen. can't wait for the nexct update, baibai!
person six_claws
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Brilliant. Shame Reno hate Cloud though, I do like a bit of Reno usting after him. Oh, well, the rest makes up for it. Love the use of the number. 24601? Jean Valjean's number if I'm not mistaken. All in all, a lovely fic, that I would enjoy hearing more of.
person AngelD
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PWAND
damm poor Vinny was PWAND!
lol that was really good though, please continues with this story
I likes its lots lots
So hurry with next chap.
-AngelD
p.s/I'm looking for a good RPing buddy, know anyone?
person ZombieDuke(not logged in)
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jaw drops, gasps, faints, waits about a half-hour, wakes up, re-reads story, dances*
THIS IS SO FUCKING GOOOD!!!!! GGGGGGGAAAAAAH!!!!! I LOVE THIS! Oh sweet Mary and the powers that be~ I want to know so much more about what's going on, about what's happening, about Cloud and Seph's past, about Vincent's past, about 'The Hold Land', the Prayers, I WANT TO KNOW MORE!!!! This is soooooo good! Please, PLEASE tell me there's more! I love the characters in this! You've taken them out of their molds and have created something new and creative!
This is just... I'm gobsmacked! It's beautiful and I DON'T WANNA LEAVE THE STORY DAMNIT! MORE!!! PLZ!!!!
*runs off to add this to favourites*
person noone
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that bum sephiroth! Eek! whats with this number and taintedness? Oh please oh please update soon! I'm really curious! PLEASE! baibai!
person liankitty
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is definately a good read; I like the characterizations, the hint of overcomplicated emotions and the touch of steamy sex. I'm a fan of Vincent/Cloud so thumbs up for that, I hope we'll see more of exactly how deep the Sephiroth/Cloud relationship went. Good work, thanks for writing!

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