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by hellparadiso

schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D Say, for it being short, it was really good. ^,^ Kudos! ♥
person Nick
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Okay. I've read this fic like... 8 times or something. It's good. But, there ARE a few small issues. The first is that Sephiroth just... wouldn't swear. He's too composed for that, too in control. Tifa... I dunno. You'd practically have to kill her to get her drunk. But, that said, even she has a limit. Hmm... I'm not gonna rate this, I'm just saying that if Sephiroth didn't swear as much, I think it'd be about twice as good. >.> It's good as it is, but it COULD be better, if you wanna do that. But, that's JUST me. I found the whole, "Beg" thing VERY good. Seems exactly what Sephiroth would do. His lust for power and control... Yeah, you got it 99.9% perfect. There's just the issue of the swearing on his part. >.> Happens in like two places, and kinda bugs me. But, like I said, just me. Great story otherwise. Pretty believable, too. I could ACTUALLY see that happen. And, I'm a pretty hardcore fan, so you've got a good vote in your pocket.
person LBo0gie
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, I liked this, it was hot. I love SephxTifaxhot sex, and this was a job well done!
person Enima
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well... I must say that this story was really unexpected :P.
It's good nonetheless and i hope there will be more Tifa & Sephiroth fics one day.
person yuki_meiseki
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like! i wish you could continue it. lolz
person oit
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oo damnn gotta luv seph/tif sadistic sex - hot.
person Bleuwyn
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice answer. Sephiroth is just to hard for me to write. I might give it a shot, but I don't think I could come up with something as good as this.
person Scorch
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep! This is some answer to my challenge.

Job well done indeed! Very nice *grins in satisfaction*

Love, S xxx

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