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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey can u tell me where u read that doujinshi im crazy for reading it now hehehehehe <33 well i cant read japanese yet but .. well... look XDD
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wowzers. Must I say this is EXTREMELY well written. As an MC fan I loved your depiction of the mist attacks and how she was slipping under- this is better-written than a lot of MC FF fiction (of the 3 that exist =D). An awesome idea, wonderful execution and attention to detail, you took your time, and the addition of Elena and Scarlet's reaction made it multi-faceted and very creative. Bravo!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
best tent story on AFF
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There's one huge problem I had with this. You had Tifa suffer immeasurable pain. THe whole stretching of her stomach and overflow of cum really turned me off...
Just don't write shit like this later.
- Aaron
Just don't write shit like this later.
- Aaron
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um...wow.
Actually, you should proofread it yourself. Read it aloud (When no one's around, of course) and you'll catch a lot of those pesky errors.
Content-wise? I was a bit squicked.
Actually, you should proofread it yourself. Read it aloud (When no one's around, of course) and you'll catch a lot of those pesky errors.
Content-wise? I was a bit squicked.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooh! *fans self*
very very raunchy~ =) i liked it!
very very raunchy~ =) i liked it!