schedule
November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has potential--but maybe stick with one tense? Either present or past--but the shifting back and forth is distracting.
schedule
November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the comment. And yeah I've had that problem for years and I can't seem to break myself of the habit. Sorry for the annoyance.
schedule
November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good story! awsome! you should keep it going a few more chappies! :D:D
schedule
November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW i love it.yes i agree there are crappy tifa and cloud fics out there and ppl DO need to write more of them.wel i loved it so hopefully you'll come up w/ more ideas.^.^