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Simply beautiful. Achingly sad. And told in such a way that we don't need to know all of the details, but can just enjoy feeling. I'm not sure I've ever read anything like it before or that I ever will again. Truly brilliant. :)

Wow, I really like the feel of this fic and it's written so beautifully!
Very Nice! ^^

One of the best one-shots I've read so far in the Final Fantasy universe. Great job with the writing; I loved how you put in more substance than just pure smut. Lovely angst. If you ever decided to write a RenoxCloud story that's more than a simple oneshot, I'm sure it would turn out awesome.

This is so beautiful. I seriously felt a twinge (a good one) while I read it.

I like this alot!!! I like how you mentioned Zack all over the it *cries whenever they speack of zack in a sad way but still loves it*
It's juts how I imagine cloud would be and also reno it's a really really beautiful piece *claps* I love it

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Propably the best fic I've ever read in my life. I have to admire your writing skills. The way you were able to include all those pieces of the world of ff7 and things about Cloud was amazing.

You wrote them both Reno and Cloud exactly the way I have pictured them. Also I really love the idea of Cloud taking care of Zack's grave, that's so what he would do. [And what he should have been doing instead of that stupid frickin' delivery service thing they made him do in ac.]

I'm not very emotional person but I have to admit that the parts about Zack made me cry. Thank you so much for writing this, you really made my day. I'm going to remember this piece.

I love the flow of this story. I don't know if they necessarily love each other. It just seems like Reno has no place to go, and he had a few choice words for Cloud. But now that those words don't really matter, what happens to them? I think it's romantic, and your style rather reminds me of someone else who writes in limited second-person. Wish I knew his link, because he writes beautifully, and so do you. You have lots of beautiful synesthesia in this story, and it makes for an attractive reading experience!

Best fanfic I think I've ever read. Probably because of the way that it's written. Never goes into much detail, but at the same time it's the perfect amount.

I wonder if Cloud...still cries fore Zack at night time...I wonder how deep Reno loves Cloud and how long...but yeah I do like Zack/Cloud fics but Reno/Cloud ones are good to see. so now what happnes next? that if this one is not a one shot. I would like to know what Rudy and Tifa thinks about them being an couple. and some Jealous...that if there well be part 2. but this fic is a good one.

I opened the story without checking to see who the author was, and recognized you by writing style.

Really enjoyed the dynamic between the guys here, how they're not sure whether to punch each other or have sex most of the time. Mmmm, testosterone. I can definitely see it happening that way between Cloud and Reno. And as always, I love your use of metaphor and little bits of memories and quirky details.