rate_review Reviews

I loved it! Please write more, or I might have to maul you.

it's an ok story. Dcent idea but.. I have a feeling you don't speak japanese... because the uses of nisan (actually, oniisan, someone's older brother, not used for yours) and kasan (okaasan someones mother) and other things kind of make it annoying. maybe I'm just a perfectionist... but I think the bad use of japanese takes away from it. You really should try and change it.
But I actually kinda liked it. Good job ^_^

ohh! I am enjoying this! i like the idea and the way it was written! very nice.