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by DarkFae

person Death Penalty
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, its pretty cool to view the story from a diferent perspective.
I love the way you write Vincent.
Can't wait to read the next chapter
Update soon!!
person Moonglider
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Take all the time you need. *hearts* I love where you've taken it so far. ^___^ *bubbles* So happy.
person LordIckarous
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Just wonderful. It is always more exciting from Vincents point of veiw. Oh god! The next chapter! I just CAN NOT wait to read the next chapter. One can not help but to wonder what goes through Vincents mind when Chaos is out..assuming that he is able to think anything at all. Or i guess he can see what Chaos is doing just as much as Chaos can see what he is doing...Bah, point is I can't wait until the next chapter! Update soon! Please!
person Moonglider
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I feel sorry for Vincent. ;_; The add on is heartbreaking, but then again it's understandable that Cid would be upset. I mean after desiring Vincent and finding out that he'd been with Cloud, that would be a slap to the face.

Well done, honey. :3
person Moonglider
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Vincent, it's nice to see the fic in his point of view, and it's horrible to read about those drug induced nightmares. ;_;
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write Vincent, it is much more than the sob story most people paint him out to be. I personally don't think he was all woe-is-me either. I believe he would have been angry as well, perhaps felt a bit guilty, but not to the sad-state like some fics point out. I like the way you have written him and I really enjoy this fic. I am glad to see that you decided to write Beneath the Red from Vincent's POV. I eagerly await each update.
person LordIckarous
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...wow. Well. That was very...bloody ^_^'

I know i have said it before, but i love your style of writing. i never find myself getting bored or skipping letters or paragraphs. It is writen in a way to where it can hold my instrest. (and believe me, that is hard to do. i have the attention spane of a peanut). I just love the way it makes me feel...sometimes sad, sometimes mad..never really happy, but this fic doesn't really scream "Everyone is Happy!" and thats good, i need a break from the happiness.

i love the way you portray Vincent, i really really do. Sad defensless Vincent is fun sometimes, but i am fond of the "Ahh i am confused and upset and i don't know what to do!" pill popping Vincent. It is a lot more unpredictable.

Ok yea, i am going to stop pretending i know what i am saying because i am no writer and far from an intellgent reveiwer filled with useful feedback, i just like what i like and don't like what i dont. and this, i like.

For the love of Odin update soon...reaaaaaal soooon. ^_^

ah yes, and i can NOT wait until the next chapter!
person LordIckarous
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have never liked cloud and this story makes me dislike him even more... he just seems to ruin everything! grrr! But yea, Cid seems like a duke of hazards sort of guy. yet again another great chapter. Thank you for updating so soon! Do it again!
person LordIckarous
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the way you write..such detail...it paints such realistic pictures in my mind. it depresses me, it angers me, it excites me. I love it when stories do that. I loved beneath the red..but i may br growing more fond of this one... it is a lot more detail and it triggers a lot more emotions. wonderful.
person geuna
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking the idea of this already! Can't wait for more.

Geuna~

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