rate_review Reviews

Lord, I love it when people get protective over Cloud like that.... XDDDDDD

*Squeee* Sooo Kawaii... ohh I´m such a big fan of your stories. Ahh I can´t get enough of them. :D XD

HI, sorry for geting in a reveiw so late er really late. Anyway, first of I have to say your strory was sooooo cute and full of warm fuzzy moments. First chapter was great but chapter two was absoulely awsome! It had me laughing so hard at picturing the scene in the shop. Zack using a ketchup bottle as a ball hee I can so see him doing that. ^ - ^ . Once again Great story.

Well I read your story and that moronic flame you got and I've got to say I liked your story. I like Cloud when he's all cute and shy and when he's macho I just like Cloud in all kinds of postions. Your right to say that reviewer shouldn't have read this story if they didn't like it. I stop reading when I don't like something. But I don't try to stifle that persons creativity. It's called fanfiction. Well I'll stop ranting. Also I realy like your writing style. Keep up the wonderfuly intertaining things coming. :)

that was 2 cute tee hee hee sweetypies.

I died for the first chapter, came back, read the second one and died again from laughter. Wonderful wonderful story. Your flamer is too funny for words.
Why must people who don't like something have to use profanity? It just shows that you aren't to be taken seriously if you can't show common curtisy when reviewing. That, and learn to spell: "and make him more right, or go right your own characters." I do believe that last 'right' should be 'write'. Yes? No?
Anyhoo, all your fics are wonderful.(and here come the parents up the driveway>_<) Baibai and hope to read more from you soon!! <3

Fuck tirixie or who ever that was there probably brain damaged as you warn us all the time you dont care about flames... Oh well stupidity will hopfully one day be painful. Anyway I really liked this. The second chapter was hysterical. I fell out of my seat. I LOVED IT!!
Toodles
YLover

Insanity is only a point of view... i happen to like what i see

Aww, I LOVED stuttering Cloud. It's great to see different versions of Cloud, not the cold antisocial one that everyone protrays him. I mean, come on. This is the past. The game was like the present, where he changed because of the incident. As for that flamer, I hope she dies a horrible death. I totally agree with you. She took this whole thing WAY too seriously.

I am SO glad you wrote this for us readers. I loved the second chapter. First Sephiroth, then Reno and last but not least, Zack! Man, you are evil.

W00t! Great story! I love the way you make Cloudette all man-chick uke-like! -huggles her then beats 'trixie' with a spork-

I personally really like your stories. Maybe your Cloud seems a little OOC, but than again this is a 16year-old Cloud that still has dreams of being part of ShinRa, not the Cloud that those labs messed up:P