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I want a Cloud for christmas too,
*sniffles*
anyho i think this is one of the cutest thing i have ever read. cloud and fluff just seem to flock together. ^_^
you are a beautiful writer and i always look forward to your next story, ;p they give me a whole new look at Cloud and the SOLDIER training thing.
i also like it how you can make Cloud go together with Reno, Seph, AND Zack. i am uber amazed, usually one author can write one good story with one of the pairings and then try to write another one but have it be rushed or not as good as the other one they wrote. but you are like 'ptt i can write good Cloudyness stories with Reno, Seph, AND Zack ALL AT THE SAME TIME!!' and then i am forced to bow down to your almighty authorness powers. *worships*
i also love it how you took a different look at zack in your earlier stories, it was just so different reading your Zack and then someone elses Zack who is all like 'I LOVE TO LOVE PEOPLE!!!' ^_^ it makes reading enjoyable when you can't predict what is going to happen next.

love all your stories!

Shiri Matakami
Lord of Fish
(to be totally and utterly random)
LINK NEEDS A HUG!!
.....
i'm done now. >.<

this chapter made me laugh soooooooooooooooooooooo hard
i think i scared my dogs...a lot
my 10 second reenactment:
Cloud: IM CUTE GIVE ME A HUG!
Seph: *HUGS*
Cloud: watch salesmen are mean...*sleeps*
Seph: hmmm *plots*
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Seph: hello, i want to buy the expensive watch becuase i am a vegful lover
Neil(?):hey, you wanna let me cower in a corner in that end of the store?
Seph: only if you promis never ever to look at the cuteness- i mean Cloud
Neil: ok mr. general sir!
Seph: *dramatic exit*
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Neil: *calls Mary* PEOPLE ARE OUT TO GET ME!!!
Mary: i am so sorry
Reno: *dramatic entrance*
Neil: gotta go, im gonna get terrorized by the government becuase i was mean to the cutest kid on the planet.
Mary: ok call me later!
Reno: you have this watch and you see-
Neil: a cute kid didn't happen to look at it yesterday did he?
Reno: how did you guess?
Neil: well, you see the general just came in here and threatened me and im thinking if this kid can make friends with the general then why can't he make friends with a turk?
Reno: you got a brain in that head of yours, but it only likes to work infront of scary people so i will let you go this time, only becuase i want to go raid your house the next time i see you.
Neil: okey dokey
Reno: *dramatic exit*
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Neil: Why? why did i have to be mean to the one cute main character? why me author? *slams head on desk*
Zack: *comes in dressed as french fry* Hey! i had this friend and he-
Neil: PLEASE TAKE THE WATCH AND ALLOW ME TO CRAWL INTO A WHOLE AND DIE IN PEACE!! *runs out of store*
Zack:... i was only gonna ask him if i would look better dipped in ketchup or BBQ sause. but hey free watch, i bet cloud will love it! *not so dramatic exit*

^_^
that wasn't quite 10 seconds but zack stole my watch so i couldn't tell :p
i enjoyed the fluff in the beginning and once again this is one of the funniest things that i have read, when reno walked out i was thinking "so zack is either going to go into the store and castrate him over teh counter or take him outside to castrate him, hmmm decisions decisions." it was very entertaining.

^_^
i hope you though that my review was semi entertaining, i read it to me cat then she bit my toe, which means that she thinks that i am totally and utterly stupid for typing on the computer instead of feeding so i have to go before she eats my foot. :p

love your stories lots!!

Shiri Matakami
Lord of Fish

Hey there, cute story and I agree that you should write the chracters as you please. As long as there are warnings to mark it plainly, people that flame anyway are not worth the time. Remember the issue with Rare Side effects?? Anyway, I have been wondering where you have...been. Normally I look forward to your reviews, and I hope I did not lose another steady commenter. Anyway, hope you had a good holiday and new year. Hope to see your reviews again soon.

-pauses-
SICK EM' BOYS! -evil squirrels attack nasty flamer- Anyways, while my squirrels attack the cocking sucking prick aka...the rude nasty flamer, I am going to preach to you.
Number 1: On this site, you can portray any character how you like, thats why there are stories posted on this site; maybe because it fic/story writing site? And the whole fact that theres talented writers on here? Oh I don't know!
Number 2: Look all around you -D U M B A S S-, everywhere in this nifty FF7 Section, theres the little innocent Cloud (most of the time innocent...you can think of naughty ways...;) portrayed in all kinds of different stories, different views and different minds. Not everyone portrays Cloud Strife that way, BUT, by all means, make him strong and manly and forceful and dominant and don't forget to make him run around like a magical pixie horse!
Number 3: Shut the fuck up you nasty mouthed, cum infested diesel diking, pussy pimple popping donkey raping shit eater!
Number 4: Before you go running your dirty little mouthe/keyboard/fingers off and prance around like a turtle with 45 firecrackers, jammed, strait up your ass, think twice about what you write and comment on other peoples work. If you didn't like the story, then fine, you didn't like the story! And theres also this nifty little thing called "Positive Criticsm"...USE IT!
By the way Zombie Duke? Yeah, your the best piece of ass in the whole damn world, I'm loving your work here, and I hope you continue to marvel me in the future. And this fic -kisses fingers Italian Style- PERFECTO! MUAH!
Alright boys, that enough. -squirrels retreat off of dead flamer's corpse-
MEHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Love <3 The Commander of the Squirrels

Thanks for your advise, ZombieDuke! ^_^ It is so true too, I've just realised (we have a singing doll, and my mother ADORES it. WHY???).
Yeesh, what a nasty flame. Guess some people just think Cloud should be all hard-core, even when he was young. *head-wall*. There is no way you can be MSTed: you don't have enough bad points. If anyone tries to MST this fic, they cannot succeed without a ENORMOUS amount of skill. No offence to you, but you do sound a /little/ like this girl I MSTed (she found out and left three full cap-locked messages). She wrote "I don't care" and "no one is forcing you to read this" as well. Of course, her story was unmentionably worse than yours. You certainly delt with being MSTed better than her.
Loved the second chapter. It's so useful to have friends in high places, no? ^_^ Zack's entrance was the best. Poor Neil! (why that name? It's not very FF; is he a friend of yours?).

Ohhhh I love your story it was sooo cute. It was really funny to. ^_^. keep up the good fics.

Way to tell that flamer who's boss! While I do have to say that your fiction might not have been the best I've ever read (It was still pretty good, thoough), I wouldn't say that Cloud was all that OOC, and I think you did a good job with the little Square gave us to go on. The truth of the matter is, we don't really know what Cloud was like back when he was in ShinRa. They didn't exactly give us much on the time before the game. All we know is that he was in ShinRa, he knew Zack and together they knew Sephiroth. We have no way of knowing that when he was sixteen or fifteen or whatever that he wasn't exactly like you described. He hadn't been captured by Hojo as of yet. He hadn't lost Zack or Aries at that time. Hell, he didn't even know who Aries was! He hadn't gone on a crusade to save the Planet, and don't even get me started on the events of Advent Children. I personally think that one, if not all, of those events would have been enough to force a person's personality to do a complete 180. Therefore, there had to be a personality before all the crisis.

Other than that, I like it a lot. It made me laugh and really got me in the Christmas spirit.

Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night!
~Miko~

Chapter 1-This was so touching and sweet! Once again, you managed to make me smile, and feel kind of warm inside. This was good for the Christmas spirit also!-- I had to go forward and read on that flame. I cannot believe you were flamed on this, on a Christmas story at that. Chapter 2-- Poor Neil, hahaha! That was priceless with Zack, the ketchup bottle, and his sword. Ohhs hahaha! *holds sides* Thank you for the smiles and the laughs! Thank you for this, and the thought behind it. Merry Christmas to you!

zack's cute!

I like this, I personally like our pretty little blue-eyed, blond haired toots to be a p-p-pansy. ^_^ And I like Sephiroth to be a badass. Cuz they're just cute that way.