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I like your story! And the flamer is a very stupid person who doesn't comprehend what fanfiction is. Other than that, cool story! I liked the part where Zack came in covered in 'blood' and scared the idiot storekeeper away. Please keep writing!

-giggles insanely at your flame from trixie- well someone needs to remove a bitch stick from someones ass..lol well i LOVED your story ^_^ it was cute and hilarious especially the ketchup baseball part >^-^< -glomps uber cute cloud- im gonna go check out some more of your stories and HAPPY CHRISTMAS and MERRY NEW YEAR!!!!

Rawr get her Duke, you sexy beast!
Hell with her if she can't figure out this is FANfiction.
You're a good writer, who writes good stories.
Great Christmas story!

heheh Cloud kawaii XD Seph as well ^^.

what a nasty reviewer u have, I think what you did with cloud was not bad ^_~

The first chapter was so WAFF. Cloud is adorable. Although he did stutter a bit much for my taste, but he was damn cute. Much love to you!

I love the second chapter, cracked up and laughed my ass off by the time Zack came in.

Merry Christmas to you~!

^^ you sure are one scary person when replying flames^^
but i would just like to point out that i don't think you didn't make cloud OOC at all. contrary to popular belief cloud was a shy and stuttering teen before the he joined avalanche or rather when he became an ex-soldier if these people played the game i think they might have gotten a clue why cloud wasn't much liked in his hometown and why he wasn't exactly became SOLDIER. HELLO!~ your view of cloud is absolutely possible! i think this people didn't spend as much time in the game i think they more of watch the movie where he the coOl blonde with the five piece broadsword because cloud is actually a funny and entertaining character in the game. oh~ i;m talking too much! sorry wanted to flame the flamers couldn't hel it anyway nice fic cute one too

That was really funny. Even more when he gave the watch at Zack and flee. I really liked it. AAAnd the way you answer flames is quite entertaining too but your right, if they don't like, they don't need to read. Anyway, I really like your stories and I hope that you'll write more soon.

WOO!! Mr. Snooty-pants got his! Heeheee...thank you!

WTF!!

My friend linked me this and said I would say that. Damn was she right!

You have taken Cloud and turned him into someone that is no longer Cloud.
You have completely ruined what SE has created to fill your odd fantasy of him being some cute mother fucking uke

Uke or Seme, whatever you make him, ukes shouldn’t be chicks with dicks. In fact, chicks have more balls then your Cloud Strife. A fucking kitten has more cock then this little cock sucking brat does.

It doesn’t matter if you see him being this way, he wasn’t. He is totally and utterly OOC to the point he is no longer the Cloud I like. Any mother fucker that reviews this shit, and says they like it, plainly doesn’t seem to like Cloud Strife for who he really is.

I am totally and utterly fucking disgusted by this shit. How the hell are you getting so many reviews with such horrible characterization? Do us a favourite and one: stop writing cloud like a fucking drunk ass low life that goes I-I-I-I-I fu-fuck m-m---m-m-m-m-mmmm-mm---mmy a-aasssss and make him more right, or go right your own characters.

Shocking you haven’t got MST yet.

Waah! Such a cute story! -^_^- I especially love the analogy about the seagulls (and the fishermen’s wives). That was very funny. If I was Cloud, I would’ve just brought Sephiroth a sharpening stone or some sword polish. But the picture is a much better idea. "A grin associated with all things sexual" Brilliant!
It IS hard to buy loved ones Christmas presents: I wanted to get my mother a new toilet seat because she wanted one months ago -- but my mother rejects this idea firmly. SHE wants a desktop computer, even though she finds it difficult to use anything beyond Microsoft Word and can't find the internet half the time. Some people have no sense.

Happy holidays! *gives giant Yule log*