rate_review Reviews

Some typographical errors and grammatical errors... Also, at some points, you mixed up the colour of Kadaj's hair, refering to it as silver and such.
Anyway, pretty interesting. I always thought Kadaj seemed a little too familiar with Cloud when they first run into each other in AC.

Goodness, that was beautiful! Brought a tear to my eye.

has a good story, and good sex. damn i love it. you should continue to write cloudxkadaj fics. i know I would read them. thanks for this one.

(I know my english is bad -sorry but I´m good reading english hehe lol)

OO i thought nii san meant big brother? who cares, this is so sweet! i need an inhaler, i need tp breath, it's not every day we get to read a good fic!

please make more stories

I think the plot was pretty well done and the emotion came over nicely. Kadaj's absolute innocence was a nice touch. The only thing I'd really have to complain about is a rather high incidence of grammatical and spelling errors. There were enough to interrupt the flow of reading but they didn't make understanding completely impossible. The descriptions were very nice, as was the background of Kadaj's plans with Jenova and his other brothers. It was really good to see that you didn't skimp on plot and development just to rush to the sex. Kadaj's attitude towards Cloud was sweet and the lemon was good. I enjoyed this story.