rate_review Reviews

This sounds like it might be interesting...if you'd continue it *eyebrow twitch*

I like your story. Not only is the plot good and all that, but there arn't a bunch of grammatical errors. Keep writing.

Loved the first chapter! Then again, I think that Reno/Cloud is just incredibly hot, so that -might- influence my opinion a bit, heh. Nah, just kidding, I really like your writing style, and Cloud and Reno seemed very in character, at least for me. Overall I liked the atmosphere of the chapter, too.
You really got me hooked to this one, I wanna know what happens next~! So, update as soon as you feel like it, ne? I'll be waiting for it! Meanwhile I guess I'll go and read that Naruto fic you were talking about. ^^

Luv,
Nipsyo

(Ps. Sorry for the crappy review, I'm no good... >.<')

Hmm, that was actually good! Err...not like that surprised me...no, course not ^^;;. Anywayz, I enjoyed it, nothing much so far as criticism, which is weird. I always have something to say - but anyway, keep it interesting - it's better that way! Hope you update soon.