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by wickedorin

person Tsukunami
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just... wow.

I read "It was not without..." first, and then this one... And I can honestly say these are two of the best fics I've read in a very, very long time. I was a bit unsure of the pairing, but I think you've converted me. ::fans self:: Hot.

I look forward to reading more! Because, you know, with how this ended, you've just left it open for an uke Cloud... ::evil grin:: I think that'd be a little.. amusing. Especially if you put him in drag... Like in the game. ha ha. Anyway, hope to see more from you!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn that was good. i swear this pairing is beginning to grow on me more and more.
person Firework
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd definatly love to see more of these two!
Fully enjoyed.
More please :D
person ZombieDuke(not logged in)
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God... That was beautiful and loving yet powerful and sexual combined. Even though I haven't read "It Was Not Without..."(and I can assure that I'll be going there as SOON as I finish writing this review) this story alone made me whimper. The detail, the characters themselves... I'm having a REALLY hard time putting this into words. It was just so erotic and beautiful at the same time.
The leash and collar, I LOVE IT!!! I loved the ending as well:
"Fantasies..." Cloud dismissed gently.
The answer seemed enough--for a moment. "Yeah, but... which end of the leash were you fantasizing about?"
XDDDD Soooooo gooooood!!!
It's so hard to find stories this good, it's like a drop of necture from a flower of paradise.
I think I can die happy now ^___^

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