rate_review Reviews

Hello. I've never been much of a reviewer, being really sucky at formulating any constructive criticism. xD This instead, is more of a thank you. Despite failing, of course, at commenting when I first found it, I've read this story so many times over the years it was starting to feel ridiculous that I've never at least told you how much joy its given me. It's become like a favorite book, a dear nostalgic experience and so consistently good that I'm in awe of you. Really, I'd like to bake you a cake, but I'm hoping my most heartfelt thanks for writing this is almost as good. I'll keep wearing it out for a long while more! ♥

I'm so in tears here after reading the ending... Seriously this has to be the best Zack x Cloud fic I have ever read, even if the ending was very sad.
I love how you made this so long, and that you made sure to give their relationship a lot of time to develop. I also enjoyed all that cute fluff and romance you put in there. I was squealing when Zack confessed his love for Cloud!
Still I also felt very sad for both Kyo and Jin... They didn't deserve to die, but sometimes, good guys dies.. the world is such a cruel place at times...
Even though I thoroughly hate Sephiroth for what he did now, you did a very very good job with his character. The calm and collected persona he has during the earlier chapters is so him. And the formal tone he speaks in. Love the little detail you put in with Sephiroth always saying "Zackary" instead of Zack.

If I wrote this, I would have given Zack and Cloud a happy ending together, but thats my personal preference.
I can completely understand why you chose this type of ending and I must say it did fit well too.
I give this fic a top score!

~Zasaki

AMAZING! such a tragic story...but also a lovelee one. its cloud and zack after all!!

this is the best zackxcloud fic ive evver read:} ammaaazin job!

Oh my God, this was so well written. You have a gift for writing dialouge that seems realistic and natural, not some tacky forced lines off a script. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you

Oh My God. I've been waiting for the final chapter for what felt like ages and wow that was so sad. i almost cried lol

This whole story was amazing and you just finished it so beautifully. I hope you write more ZackxCloud fics :)

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY that was good! And not as angsty as I thought it would be...but that's because you didn't go on to say what happens afterwards. I'm assuming that's following the storyline, but you didn't mention something about a nightmare...? It'd be nice to think it's just all a dream.
Liked that last bit in italics, very powerful, and it ended the story on a good note. Overall a very well-written and gripping story that further explored the details of the game and the relationship between Zack and Cloud. Great job!
ReaperRain

(Gyaha, I'mma nobody.)

HI. I've been reading your story for... a few months? I don't remember. XD And just finished it, so I just wanted to say... I LOVED it--and hated it at the same time. D: ...Zack does not technically die. I don't think I can stand it anymore. XDD Zack and Cloud were saved, Tifa was magically found dead, and the two lovebirds ran off to Midgar SAFELY to live happily ever after. That's my story--and I'm stickin' to it. I'm going to have to go through the entire story again so I can find that one spiffy chapter. Well. Thank you for the story. I loved the feel that you gave to the ending despite it making me want to sob mah heart out. xD

Lastly, we shall see if I can comment... Since I don't have an account. *waits*

;_; i love squaer for creating ff7 but i will forever hate them for killing Zack.
i was happy to see another chapter up and now that i realize that this one is the last one im feeling a little depressed cuz for like a year now i have been cheacking this story everday to see if there are updates and now i wont have anything to cheack..it's sad..and the ending was even sadder..i cried..i really love Zack and i just love him with Cloud and i think that writing a fanfic about their time toghether at shinra was genuis but then this only makes me sadder when i know that Zack dies in the end ;_;
i love the way you write, this chapter was great , sad, but great and i hope to see more fanfics from you ^_^ i think you did a great job with copying the dialouge from the OVA because it makes your story fit so well with the official one.
the part in this chapter that connects to Clouds dream i thought was really good and it send shivers down my spine thinking about it and i loved the last paragraph it gave it a bitter sweet ending, and yes it's really angasty seeing as how they dont stay toghther forever..but yeah Zack will always be in Clouds heart..and in my mind and heart those two are living happely ever after ^_^ denail is good for the soul.
wow ok iv wrote a long review this time..but i hope you'll forgive me sense it's the last chapter and i feel that you and this story diserve TONS & TONS of credit , so to summurys LOVE the story LOVE your writing and thxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx so much for finally creating a long decent ff7 yaoi fanfic with CloudxZack cuz they are the BEST ff7 yaoi coupal EVER XD
Rinoa ^_^

Nice.