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my god i could almost feel cloud's heartache at finding out about aerith. i love cloud/zach relationships, and yours is just too sweet. i am going to keep reading.. more more more!!!

hey this story is getting interesting. keep it up. update next chapter soon.

Wohoo another chapter it was worth the wait ^_^
i really hope that you will wright an epiluog to this story cuz i really like it and even though Zack dies in the ff7 story i refuse to acknowledge that cuz i love him way too much as a charecter thats why im hopeing for an epiloug where Zack will be alive and that he and Cloud will have a happy ending! anyway i liked this chaper and the way you detalied everything tough i would have liked to have a better explenation of the monsters cuz i didnt really get how they were supposed to look..but then again i just might lack the amount of imagenation that is needed ^_^;
last comment about the chapter the last part of it made me really emberrased since i keep thinking that the walls were very very thin! and that seph and jin were hearing them..and as much as i love seph as a Seme and in yaoi thinking of him in this story hearing them was oddly emberassing...so strnage.. well anyway great work keep it up!
Rinoa

FUCKING UPDATE, ALREADY!!!!!! OMG. I. AM. GOING. TO. HAVE. A. SEIZURE.

I love this one :)

You know, I normally don't read many-chapter-stories. Especially not when I'm just looking for yaoi fics (... lol? xD) But ehm, it's great... And I hope you'll submit the next chapter soon :)

This probably won't help, but I say let's get to Nibelheim only at the speed required. After all, if Cloud's going to be suffering from motion sickness, the trip is going to take ages in his mind. It might take a long time for Sephiroth, too, since he wants to get moving and it only seems that they keep slowing down for various reasons. It might not be so bad for Zack and Jin, who are so busy worrying about Cloud and each other that the trip doesn't feel like it takes as long.

The dream was REALLY freaky. I'm not sure exactly what it means, but I think I have an idea. Even if I'm wrong, you get a Creepy Dream Award.


--RN (LS)

great another chapter! i liked this chapter because it gave me an easy going kind of feeling for some reson even though i know the end is nearing...and i personaly hate the end squaer gave zack..but then again the dream that Cloud hade made me a bit hopeful that is if i got the right impression... anyway loved the chapter and once again i'll say that i just love the way you write Zack & Clouds relationship they are just so sweet. about your question i would like to have more detalis about their journy to Niblehime cuz i dont really want this story to end to fast^_^; but it depeands on your mood right?cuz if you feel like jumping stright to the Niblehime incident then you should after all i think it's best you follow your gut ^_^ either way i'll continue reading and loveing this story. thats all keep up the great work!
Rinoa

Oh please thank you for this chapter... but please dont kill Zack!!-_-, i know the story but please make yours different...pleassse.I have no right to tell this but your story its simply great and.. well Zack(desperates cries)*_* doesnt matter(sigh),keep it like that
bye

wow were getting closer to the end...and it's going to be a sad one...*sigh* oh well if it wasnt connected to the real ff7 story it wouldnt have been this good...but still i wanna keep reading but im dreading the end.
it must have been a pain to rewrite this chapter so thank you very much for doing so and not giving up i really liked the way you made Cloud lock away his feelings when Kyo died it's so much like him to be in pain but push it to the back of his mind ^_^ . it's also very smart of you to add Jin to the Niblehime assigment but then i guess that only makes his end a bit more obvious and yet thats a great way to connect the plot to the ff7 game.
well thats all good work cant wait for the next chapi !!

Rinoa

love the story!!!! Keep it up!!!!! Please! I cant wait to read the rest!