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Oiiii, cutie Jealous *Zackary*. I just love when Sephy calls him that o.O. I love this story, and I'm so glad it wasn't abandoned, since I just only recently started reading it. Glad it's back and getting along finely. Should get interesting. TnT

Great chapter, I was slightly surprised by Zack's reaction about Jin but I suppose I can't blame him. Plus Possessive!Zack is cute! *grins* Can't wait for the next chapter but take your time if you need it,

-SheWolfe7

Wahh, great chapter! Your story has really reminded me how much I love Zack/Cloud. And I really love the character Jin... I'm usually not a fan of OCs but I really feel for him. I can't wait to see what else he tells Cloud, and how Cloud will react...

*Sparkle...Sparkle* Ay, I love this story so far ::Enter vaudevillian chibi V:: So funny, so romantic, so the bitch of cliffhangers =T_T=!! Lol, it's great so far, though, can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out. *Spaaaarkle*
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I blame you. I blame you entirely because I didn't get any homework done today! ;) I just got totally wrapped up in this story...and I couldn't stop. Addictive...that's what it is. I can't wait to read more. Especially with Jin's little...confession. The plot thickens! Keep it up, I'd love to see a conclusion to all of this angsting and drama someday...though I'm sure there will be more angsting and drama ahead. :) It's really great to read because it's like "a day in the life of a soldier in training", which is just...it's like Harry Potter in that it goes through all the details really closely. Awesome story. And now I'm rambling so I'll leave my review at this and wish you the best of luck!

AH! you don't know how happy i was to see that you updated! -^w^-

this fanfiction has become my FAVORITE among all fanfiiction! and it's my favorite pairing, which is better! XD
can't wait for the next chapter! XD

Yes, an update! I love this story and always eagerly await an update. But, don't push yourself too hard, okay. :)

waiii~! another great chapter another great and hot sex sceane~!! i really love Zack & Cloud toghether~!! and your story continues to remaind me how much i love them as a couple~! the way you write their relasionship is brillient~!
i think your right about focusing on Clouds disapoinment in not makeing it into SOLDIER after all it really was an importent thing in his past~! and god i just knew Jin would make a move on him~! i really want Zack to find out about it and be overly protective of cloud~ that will be major cute~!!
so tnx for writing this keep up the good work im looking forwared to the next chapter~ ^_^

lol hey hey hey!
I can review here too! ^-^
yay! you rock!
awesomeness again.............................
......................indeed..............

so uh....yea...keep it comin yo.

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Yay! Practically everyone loves Cloud >< But then again, who doesn't? I can't wait for the next chapter!!