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Kind of saw that Jin thing coming... I was wondering when he was going to get it out ^^ I'm glad cloud's getting 'better', but I'm not sure how Jin is going to help things by telling Cloud the truth...then again, I don't think Cloud can fully get over (well, if you're going by the game, I guess he never did) it if he doesn't hear what Jin has to say. Lovely chapter.

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but I must say that you're keeping up with your quality. Please update soon, I would really like to know why Cloud wasn't excepted.

I like very much the way than you describe all their lovemaking. Great fic!:D

waiiii another great chap! although i knew that cloud was going to fail i kept wishing he wouldnt honestly he deserved to pass it so much ;_; i just wanna hug him~~ the parts with Jin are cool cuz i think zack is going to have himself a little raivel in romance (i wonder if that will be true??) anyways good work im so happy your continuing this story and not giving up i admire you for that so much *bows* keep up the good work i cant wait to the next chapter!
^_^

Update more, please! This is one of the few stories I follow nowadays and I can't wait for more chapters! I look forward to the next update!

PLEASE update soon!!! I love this fic and I'm dying to know what happens next =)

-SQUEE!-
Wow... I have to say that for your first lemon scene, that was bloody well amazing.
This whole story is bloody well amazing. I started this just after midnight, and now it is 4, and I have to say it is the best spent four hours of my week thus far.
Your writing makes me smile and I love how you portray the characters, the plot and everything.
Gah.
I am jealous of your talent.
But really... that lemon scene. I really liked how you made it more realistic, if you will, not just some attempt at a low grade porn script. It has to be one of the best that I have read. And I live on here, so that is saying something...
Only thing I would have to say that is not me going on about how amazing your writing is that you should watch how your tenses shift. I noticed it in a few spots where the tense was off either for one word or just a strange shift between sentences. Aside from that, brilliant work!
-scatters sakura blossoms about-
Cheers!
-tips hat and rolls away-

Just letting you know that was the BEST lemon I have ever read...it was so real! and i have been reading yaoi for a long time now, this is the best, especialy for a first time! What I realy like about your writing, is that it's so mature and cool at the same time, I especialy like the way you stay in character..not like other writers....anyway keep up the Impecable stories ;)

Yes, its about time Zack pounded Cloud into sexual bliss! ~Cheers~ Anyways, very good chapter! Please keep up the hard work you've been putting forth on this story, for I am sure people will keep reading!

I like this chapter! Your lemon was good, better than my attempts anyway. I tend to shy away from them ^^* I can't wait for the next update!!!