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for Crystal Clear

by MystIc19

person Rinoa
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wahh...so sad ;_; poor cloud , poor zack...*sniffs* i hope their gonna make up soon i hate it when things like that happen poor thing~!!! but yet again excellent story~! i really love it~ man Aerith is such a drag though zack should change his phone number so she wont be able to call him anymore and create misunderstandings~ im soooo looking forwared to your next chapter (please dont make us wait too long ne?) keep up the great work~!
person Hiba
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~Grabs slave driver whip and starts to beat the heck out of mrs. author.~ WORK HARDER FASTER MORE MORE MORE! WE NEED MORE! ~pants for breath.~ Okay, got that out of my system....but really, update soon. I really like this story...infact I look in on it first thing in the morning before I start work....there are very few fics that have ever gotten me so wraped up like this ~~
person Josa
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is way awsome!!! love it !! keeps geting better!
person Alice
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is possibly the best storie i have !ever! read. it just keeps getting better and better! im deffinately saving this storie. you have major talent to make this soo good. Thank you!
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omy this story is so good and can not stop thinking about whats going to happen!! please dont make me wait for ever! Take as long as you need just as long as you dont drop this story like other authors!!!

Shank Shank Shank YOuYouYOU!!!
person Hba
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling I know exactly where this story is going...I hope i'm wrong cause I wanna see a happy ending ^^! Keep up the hard work, can't wait till I see the next chapter up!
person margyy
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o00o0oh! i love this fic so far! ^__^ just hope we get some more yaoiness soooon T-T
person Rinoa
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;_; ahhh poor cloud!!! i hate it when they get hurt over misunderstandings! *hopeing to see them make up soon*
this chapter was good! but i kept thinking that jin is gonna try and rape cloud! my yaoi-rape sensor went mad when ever you wrote that he was looking at cloud a bit diffrently ^_^; though if hey try it would be a good chance for zack to become a knight in shining armour that comes and saves cloud! oh god im soo kinki...well anyways great job really looking forward to your next chapter! you go girl!
person TehPenguin
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done, I can't wait for more!
Its such a cute story, I like this pairing alot^^
person okita1209
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey update soon, you hear!? I wanna see more and you're an awesome writer, so keep it up!

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