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for Shattered Dreams

by Crya2Evans

person Tant
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a pretty good chapter. Yuffie and Nanaki aren't my favorite characters, but they're ok.
Is Raven going to have any part besides the one-shot? I usually don't like OCs, but I do like him.
person Ri
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww all Yuffie and Nanaki in this one which was sweet but gaspers about Yuffie being married to some dude! Grrr, but yay Nanaki is back to his demi-human self again...if only there is a way to make him completely human ya? Well i can't wait to read more this one sweet between them two imo, so update soon ya? I can't wait to read more! ^^
person ayachan
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woah! that's not cool.. can't wait to see what uryuu and yuffie has to say to one another XD uryuu? from bleach again? because i do love my quincy so *sniffle*
person Ri
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay i so wanted to review this yesterday but stupid AFF decided to act up on me so my review did not even work!! Gah and i don't recall what i even said! I know it was a good review. But anyways Poor Sephiroth!! Gah i mean the way he spoke to Lucrecia! MY GOSH! That was harsh! Poor guy T_T So much he had to suffer through. I totally forgot what i said yesterday i am so sorry this review ain't much of a big deal but this chapter was sad, i mean poor Sephiroth those questions his emotions. *Sniffles* Another excellent chapter IMO, update soon!
person Dree
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... too true.... *laughs* I can see the picture... those two at a lake... fishing... *crazy giggles*




*grins* Lucrecia got what she deserved...ish..... more pain for her I say!!!!! She hurt everyone, that ~various derogatory words~


More!!! I say More!!!!
person ayachan
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, interesting chapter! i like what you did w/ septhiroth going all mad again.. that was cool. hope everything turns out ok for them ^^ can't wait to see some.. uhh.. flirting, i guess, between tseng and septhiroth! lol, good luck and keep up the good work!
person Tant
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you told us what happened in the cave.
I'm not sure Cid would have the patience for fishing. They'd probably fish for a few minutes, then Cid would get fed up, start cussing out the fish, and then throw one of his sticks of dynamite in the pond. I can just see Sephiroth sitting through all of it with one of those big anime sweatdrops.
person Ri
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more emotion and secrets! Mmmm apple pie....XD this review is so random. But great chapter, poor Archer he needs someone now! And some smut!! Anyways another good chapter i cannot wait for the other one! And Tseng being called a robot. =P Heh heh that was cute, i mean he is too hot for a robot, or he can be a hot robot. Is this review even part of the story anymore? It is! It is just being worded wrong. update soon! I shall shut up now. =P
person ayachan
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woo-hoo! shattered ice redux!!!! quite exciting. anyway, i hope that cid and vincent make up, which i'm sure they will, and I will wait patientely until ch. 38 to see what lucrecia said to sephiroth. Can't wait to see who is vincent's new guardian as well.. he sounds like a real hoot ^^
person Ri
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay the smut hot! But then it got so emotional!! MY GOSH!! Thier lover's quarrel! Gah poor Cid feeling like that yet not waiting for a better explanation and vincnet fo rnot being more clearer, but man oh man i wanted to just hug poor Vincent! boo! Then when they went to see Lucrcia more emotions spilled over! Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter! Will Cid try and understand? Will they forgive each other!? So great! Update soon!

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