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One of the best Cloud/Seph fics I've ever read. (I've read a LOT)Excellently done!

Your writing is livid and emotional. I could picture all of it and for some reason, I wasn't disturbed. I wanted to cry almost because I could see that, all of it. Please, my lovely, continue, You have quite a knack

Hisweety, just read your chapter again and I have to say that I think you've reached your zenith. A tour de force, no bullshit.

That was exquisite, dear. Very very hot, and very beautiful, and very sad, and just right. Thank you. : )

XIX

Now that was something new. Beautifully dark and hot, I absolutely love it. Seriously, I had to plug my nose while reading even though I wasn't really nosebleeding. It just had that effect. Also I love how you portray Cloud's anger and the cause of Seph's surrender at the end got me right in the heart. It gave me an impression of replaying the game and seeing it in another light. Awesome job and thank you for writing. Hope to read more from you. ;)

That was hot o.o

And kinda sad. I got all misty eyed at the end. Poor Sephy *sniffle*

Great story! I love uke Seph, especially when the seme's Cloud. As you said, it's a hard-to-find pairing.
Also I like the way you picture Seph. I guess not many people see him as something more than an almighty psycho who wants to destroy the word. Thanks for all the fun.

Not really into this pair but thought I check this out. Its nice to see Cloud kicking some fucking ass once and awhile.
I think if you piss Cloud off enough he sure as hell will whip a can of whoop ass out on you. Sometimes fangirls make Cloud too soft. I think even I do at times.

It was cool.
Shadowicia

"Fucking Sephiroth’s ass was as alien a concept as Rufus ShinRa being straight."

I loved that line. And the fic. As you say, an odd pairing, but it definitely works!

HOT! Red, fiery hot! Really some of the darkest Uke!roth I've seen to date. I like that you dwelled more on Cloud's anger instead of his grief, as is more commonly done. The sex was steaming and yet there was actual motivation and feeling behind it on both sides. It made this fic believable and more than just a good PWP. There's enough little detail behind Seph's sadness and Cloud's struggling to make a reader wonder about what the full story was on both sides. I'm usually not fond of seeing reference to Earth things in FFVII fanfiction, but the phrase about Sephiroth wearing blood like Gucci really nails that image in the mind. It's just the perfect line, great rhythmic balance and it says exactly what it needs to with really stunning clarity and impact. This was some damn fine fiction!