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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was the best lemon I ever read. I can't believe NOBODY reviewed. People need to review more. :\
Anyways, I like how you gave both of them equal opportunity to one another and the creative ways in which each tried to please the other. Even for a simple movement at the end (missionary style), you managed to make that into so much more for her. I also liked seeing them get used to each other and slowly fall in love, but not to much. Very very subtle, you know? Overall, great fic I wouldn't mind reading over and over.
Anyways, I like how you gave both of them equal opportunity to one another and the creative ways in which each tried to please the other. Even for a simple movement at the end (missionary style), you managed to make that into so much more for her. I also liked seeing them get used to each other and slowly fall in love, but not to much. Very very subtle, you know? Overall, great fic I wouldn't mind reading over and over.