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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is such a sweet story! I loved it. Great Job!
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April 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this is pretty much smut for smut's sake. But I'm not complaining. Sometimes a good PWP is just what the doctor ordered. It was well written with delicious description and captivating attention to details, and I'm delighted to see a Cloud pairing "dating back" to his SOLDIER days without him being the girliest bottom ever. The way you built the ambience in the story is great and wonderfully in the moment. The ending was was rather bittersweet but I think it gave an interesting feel to it, very much fitting the tragic hero he became.