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Well well Sugar Butt you do S&M quite well... Lemon's be damned. I can't say I enjoyed you making total brutal thugs and butchers our of some of my Favorite Bad boys...I always consider their personalities more complex than just totally Evil! I guess I prefer their character traits to have just a little bit more finesse...can you dig it babe.

Sorry, Such Sick violent fuckers just don't turn me on. But then I don't need to read your stuff now do I? So keep writing to please yourself, Babe!

Thanx for the reviews - I didn't even realize how many fucking italics were in the story until Holly mentioned it. It was ridiculous. So... I took a bunch out. I wrote the story in HTML code, so I couldn't really tell what it would look like on the web. Wow. Thanks for the tip. I was also thinking of having Sephiroth get a little mushy... just a little? I'll tone it down, I guess. I haven't thought of another good torture scene yet, so I'll take suggestions!

LMFAO THAT WAS HILAROUS!! Sephie rapes Rufus, Sephie and Reno rape Rufus, Reno rapes Rufus, Sephie rapes Reno. I think the real poor bitch in this story is Rufus. =)

Oh my, the way you've written this ... you got Sephiroth down exactly right :D I'm hoping Reno isn't broken just yet, just so we get to see some more competition between those two ¬__¬ heh heh heh

Ignore I said short. I just read it too fast in anticipation.

Either that or it is shorter, just looks longer because it does not use large paragraphs like you previous chapters.

But still, wonderful fiction, I do hope there will be more soon, and hopefully no "fuzzy, loving feelings" between any of the three.

Sephiroth is too insane to love anything, Reno is too, Rufus can do anything he likes. He falls in love, so be it, but he should get tortured for doing so. Yes, I am sprouting devil horns at the moment.

I ahve to admit, BDSM is not exactly my favorite standby. But seriously, you raised it up to an artform. Depravity never read so well.

aha! another chapter so soon ^^ I like it XD aaah, the minds of the mildly perverted, fun ne?
Sooo~ #7 - apart from the mass of italics, I thought it was great ~^
I demand more. More more more. These 3 are just great, hell yes.

Oh, how hot! Absolutely delicious!
Is it just me or is this chapter shorter than your previous chapters?
I could do with it being longer, more descriptive, more sadistic (if possible) but I will wait for another chapter. =)
I hope there is nothing between Sephiroth and Rufus - this mad, sadistic, rapist of Sephiroth is much better than any "All of a sudden, I'm in loooove with you, though I 'raped' you."
I hope I will not see that sentence or anything like it in here.
However... Rufus needs to be fucked over. Again. Tortured. He's been a bad boy for thinking Reno was better than Sephiroth.

I will wait, ever patient, for the next update. This is too good to miss.

Thanks so much for all your reviews, everyone! There's nothing better than hearing what people are thinking about my fiction; it really means a lot to me. I'm glad people are enjoying my twisted storyline... I certainly enjoy writing it. I'm working hard on the next chapter, and I promise it will be up as soon as possible!

Thanks again,
Lauren

I think that your fic here is one of the best written on AFF. Not many get this attention from me, but I find your story
1) INCREDIBLY erotic, which is how I like it
2) an interesting read, meaning it had plot unlike other stories
3) long, which I love, because I read a lot
4) almost perfect in grammar, spelling, and it has good use of italics
5) captivatingly realistic and believable.

In fact, I am sadened you have not posted an update yet - you put in a nice little cliffhanger there. Good use of suspense!
Amazing ethos, pathos, and logos! I will wait patiently for more.