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OMG, I love this story so much! It's one of those things that makes you feel really guilty for liking but you still read it anyhow and can't wait for the next chapter. So please, please don't make us wait much longer, k?

THAT WAS SO HILARIOUS!!!!! I cant wait to read more, its gonna be so funny when he wakes up!!!!

Oh my bleeding gods, lauren, that was fantastic. I cannot stand ukeroth usually, but this recent chapter was just too good not to read. I can't stress enough what a terrific writer you are, though I critique whenever I can. This past chapter brought up the most strangest feeling in me, this... sick, morbid, delight. Rufus definitely becomes sleazier and sleazier with every chapter (hence why his punishments become more and more extreme?) but fucking Sephiroth while the other wasn't even conscious really takes the cake. It was mind-blowing! I read this a couple days ago, while suffering from the woozy effects of migraine drugs and I had not been wearing glasses for two days (so the world was a muddle of blurs and fuzzy edges). Basically, I felt as if I were high and reading this chapter already in such a state was fantastic.

I did not review then because I sounded completely drunk and I'd rather not write while sounding drunk in all honesty.

I will review again in a few days for grammar and such.

I can tell you what I liked, a lot.

"Tequila solves everything."

I loved Sephiroth's complete, dominant nature, even though high on morphine and completely wasted. Fantastic.

The maximum (or is it?) extent of Rufus' sleaziness was revealed, and Reno... what can I say about Reno? He is an enigma. Though at first appearing plain and simple - bent of sex, drugs, and booze - his history is revealed as a street thug, as someone who risks lives for revenge, and someone who jacked off to the two people who raped him. I wonder what his next move will be?

Speaking of next moves, I don't even know how to begin to think about Sephiroth's reaction. Waking up naked and sore with only a memory of Rufus coming over... I think Rufus will be abused to hell again (though you may surpise me) and the damage caused would probably put the rest of the chapters to shame. I'd say the rest of the BDSM fics out on AFF.net, but... it already did... several times, in fact.

I still feel a bit woozy, so forgive me if I make no sense. I will feel better soon, and then I will give you a thorough review!

One more comment:

This is a review of mine for Chapter 10, I believe:

PS: It forshadowed that Rufus will be on top

So true! Excellent use of forshadowing, brilliant!

Sephiroth+Rufus? Hawt.
Reno watching? Even better.
Ukeroth? *turns into a puddle of ooze* Ohhhh yeahhh...

^^ I started reading your fic many many moons ago, but didn't have an account then so I didn't/couldn't try to review it. Glad to finally be able to tell you how awesome it is.
(My favorite parts are the Reno-raping bits... Is it wrong to beg for more of them? *sweat* )

So to sum up- feckin' amazing. <3

Ha... Ha ha. Those were some brilliant chapters to finally get back to(!!) ((not having decent internet access=no story joy))
Fantastic. Not only is your writing still excellent, your sense of humour is superb. Oh! The text message business at the end of 'holy fuck' was so good! The built up tension fantastically diminished by the absolute childish boyishness of Reno and Rufus. Oh, oh the joy.
Plus, whilst Ukeroth (<- great phrase) is unusual, still doesn't bother me. It doesn't ever surprise me either, certainly not when written by your wonderous brain.

Question is, do we get more? Of Ukeroth or crazed Sephiroth? Only time will tell! And damn I'm glad I'm back and able to read it :D

...apparently the rest of my review was eaten by the internet worms. I'll try and recover it.

Plus, whilst Ukeroth (<- great phrase) is unusual, still doesn't bother me. It doesn't ever surprise me either, certainly not when written by your wonderous brain.
Question is, do we get more? Of Ukeroth or crazed Sephiroth? Only time will tell! And damn I'm glad I'm back and able to read it :D
You might get an enhanced critique at some point, you might not ;D hopefully you shall.

God damn it's the bloody problem with internet coding. At least I had the sense to copy it...

"Plus, whilst Ukeroth (great phrase) is unusual, still doesn't bother me. It doesn't ever surprise me either, certainly not when written by your wonderous brain.

Question is, do we get more? Of Ukeroth or crazed Sephiroth? Only time will tell! And damn I'm glad I'm back and able to read it :D"

Oh MY FUCKING GOD!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA thaaaaaaaat was AWESEOME!!!!!! AHAHAHAHAHA That text messaging bit at the end was just... PERFECT. SUCH sweet icing on the cake. I died. I DIED laughing.
You have serious issues and I just love them all.

Been anticipating it, lovely! You done good!

At first I was like no..not date rape. Then Seph is all like RAWR and I was all like YAY and Rufus was all like JIZZ.

Bit o hilarity at the end there also! I hope this story keeps going for like..ever.