rate_review Reviews

Totally loving this fic! PLEASE update soon! Til then, Im going to go read it again :)

This is a very good story! Good writing, good characterization, it's a nice change to what I normally see as "dark stories" and has a lot of good flesh to the story. I love that you have ignored the "laws" of uke/seme roles here, even with Rufus who can't seem to escape getting it up the ass (in very hot ways!) you've managed to keep the character from being blatant "uke" material. So lots of love for this story! What I really want to say though is that I read your chapters and stare at the screen, riveted, thinking "omg, I hope everything turns out okay...please be okay!..." and then--your story gives me the finger and proceeds to raise hell. Which is awesome. It just wouldn't be the same if my hopes came true and everything ended up in rainbows and unicorns. So for continually telling all my hopes for characters not to suffer to go to hell, I just have to say thank you. I think that's what's part of this story that makes it such a great read for me.

Great. A very nice combination of sex and violence, and the timing is excellent. The ending of the chapter definitely leaves me wanting to know WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? How did you get so cute and so smart at the same time? A very good job, as usual.... makes me want to lurch into you.

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!??!???????/ YOU JERK!!!!!!!

<3
That's all I can say.
<3

No it does not! And I don't see too much fucked up here! I absolutely loved Sephiroths possesiveness. And the way you always keep your characters...well in character. As always I love your writing and I idolize you immensely. You have to return the favor! I added a couple of chappies on mine and it might get a little rough later on =.O
W

...

OMFG damn woman! Talk about cliffhangers! I weep for chapter 13. Much love for mistress author lauren <3. Please feel free to continue beating characters to bloody pulps and torturing them with kinky sex, because you do it oh so well.

Mother of God, he was high. Blindingly holy fuck high. <<<<<< Can i barrow that? lol i love your story btw.

Ok one more review for you. on Account im cool like that. As much as my outer persona says to people "Thats wrong..So wrong. Blah blah." I am torn between two. As your writing in some strange sick way turned me on, and both inspired me.. Hmm..I commend you. Fellow Writer for being awesome. Lol

I read it all - the whole fic in one go and......
Yikes/Wow
I have such a love/hate relationship with this story - and I'm dying to know where it's going. You write beautifully, even when it's something barbaric. I love it. I need you to finish it.
Savannah.