rate_review Reviews

Great story!!! Can't wait to see more chapters for this one...great beginning for the three young characters....update soon!!!!;D

That's an interesting story. It really doesn't fit the original FFVII timeline, so it may be seen as an AU of sorts, don't you think? All the same, I like what you have so far. Vince is one of my fav chars ever, and it's fun to see him paired with Zack - I suppose there aren't that many stories 'bout them 'cause of the timeline thingy, but they probably would've made a fun couple.

Anyways, I hope you'll have more of this soon, 'cause I really enjoyed it. See ya 'round!

~ RL

Anger and love formed in 2 seconds... cool X3 Anyways. Nice lil chapter. And how soon is the end? The next chapter (damn) or a few more (yay)?

Found you! Knew I'd find it.... eventually..... so for chapter 3.... OMG! I knew it. As soon as Vincent handed over the phone, I knew something like that was gonna happen. Good chapter *nods* And I'll probably say the same once you post it on Aarinfantasy. Just..... Lily is an idiot, Vincent rules, and Zack needs a few more rounds of alchohal so he can get over this lil mishap and maybe fuck or be fucked by Vince.... with Cloud on the side(?) Yeah.... I'll shut up now *scurries off to play in Photoshop*

(Sorry if this ends up doubled. AFF is like..... really iffy)

*bookmarks page*

I'm keeping my eye on this one, I like it!


btw.... don't tell me that there is an actual fighting style with the word "uke" in it... unless of course you want me die laughing

*bows*

Hmmmmmm. Veeery interesting. So, who is it at the door, Cloud? And does Zack mean to get Vincent drunk and humiliate him at the party? Did Zack find out that Vincent saw? And was the brunette the original character? or was it Squall/Leon? Hoping to read more, very good story idea, like how you put Vincent and them in the same timeline. Update please, baibai!

this is the first fic I've seen of this pairing
your doing a great job, please keep it up

oh yes part 2 was just great.more please.

Really like this story!

wow i hope there is more.it was really good.