rate_review Reviews

Really loving it so far, just at chapter 18. I love Mike, I think he is a real treasure! What a great character! I also really enjoy reading about Squall and Seifer. They're written perfectly. Can't wait to see what the other chapters hold! :D

*cries* T.T Whaha!! That was not the best chapter to read first thing in the morning... ;_; *pokes Seifer pulshie* So sad. Great chapter though... :]

Ahhhh!! *runs into a wall* ... *gets up and does it again* x_X
Squall!!! ;_;

What have you done?!!

*continues reading*

*runs into another wall* Awww!! *glomps* That was so unbelievably cute and in character! *bows to your greatness*

:3

Wow.... just.... wow.

This is seriously the first fanfic I've ever bothered to read that's over 5 chapters. And such LONG chapters too (not a bad thing. xD).

I really do love your writing style. You capture the emotions, thoughts, and even hand gestures so perfectly. As I'm reading I can perfectly imagine what each charecter does exactly. That takes talent. I wish you all the luck in your writing career!

And so far, I've only seen about... 3 spelling mistakes... out of maybe 293080934809238409 words you've written. Not many writers can do that even with spell check lol. One thing is though... I think 'Leonhart ga daisukidesu yo' is better translated as 'I like Leonheart alot' rather than I love Leonhart... Oh well, not many fanfic readers speak fluent Japanese anyways ^^;;

Gah... I can't wait to read the sequel... die Irvine!! hehe >_>;;

Oh my god, I need to kill Shiva... D: She made me cry, too. Poor Squall...at least now he knows, without a doubt!

Somehow I missed that you'd updated ^^ So I got lots to catch up on.

This story is amazing. You've definately converted me into a Squall/Seifer fan. And I love how you've kept them all in character.
-moves on to the next chapter-