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Omg, omg, omg, what a cliffy! O___O
L-Laguna whooping ass?!
Awesome!!
Wow, just, oh wow, the Daddy's are fighting.
>_____<
FREAKIN' AWESOME!

Hmmm... I wonder what Squall has in store for Seifer?
*curious face*

The gift...It's about...Doing kinky sex?! If it's that, Seifer will be soo glad!!MDR!!
Seifer was so mean with Squall at the beginning!! He deserved a hundred of punchs!!
Good continuation!^^

Whether or not you intend it, I'm trying to imagine Selphie as Headmistress or Commander. That . . . would be SOME Garden.

Now the question is: Who will be taking over as Commander when Squall resigns? (Of course, I'm not expecting an answer--the mystery makes it fun!)


~LS

Ooooh, the plot thickens. You make me want to shake Squall sometimes, and that's one of things I love about your writing; I can't help but also justify his behavior. Way to make a paradox. Always looking forward to more from you!

First of all, I would like to say that it's good to be back on AFF after the problems that they have been dealing with.
And second, I have spent a whole day reading the rest of Protecting the Lion and Strings Attatched (no, I'm not a slow reader!).
Ahem...your writing is wonderful and I was very pleased with the ending of Protecting the Lion. I am REALLY enjoying
Strings Attatched. I love how each character is trying to cope with Seifer and Squall's relationship. Everyone's
personality is right on the mark. Seifer makes me laugh and Rinoa annoys me (exactly when I played the game ^v^).
Well done! ^_^

P.S. Please update soon!

Oh, I adore this fic! Excellent, especially your take on Squall and Seifie's interactions...I think you've totally nailed them *grin*. Each chapter is a very easy read, with a little bit of everything-done really well, too, that seems like such a rarity- and multi-dimensional characters who don't really fit into a category. I adore you for that, as well, it makes everything seem so much more real. Keep up the outstanding work, please, I look forward to your updates. Promise to be a better reader/reviewer in the future!

Your works are Great! I am not a native English speaker, but reading your writings has become a very entertaining moment for me Every Week! I love the way you describe the gradual emotional changes between Squall & Seifer, they are amazing, really. Some chapters even made me on the edge of crying. And a horny Squall, that's fantastic! Your version of Seifer Almasy is quite convincible, too. I think most of other writers' Seifer is of cruelty (emotional speaking), or a playboy who may has Squall between his fingers (and it those stories Squall seems to become a love puppy, how sad!). Your stories are not like that. I have read all the chapters of Protecting the Lion and Strings Attached (updated to 20), the characters in your stories are able to keep sanity even in the maddest love, which in most fanfictions they are not. You are very good at outlining characters. That is a rare quality for fanfiction writer. In your stories, I see "people". In one word, I love your writings, and thank you for such beatiuful stories!

Yours,
Tianny

I love this storory! i'm glad you decided to do a sequal to Protecting the Lion! Can't wait for your next update.

*deep breath* Where to start. ...Wow. I come back from a small vacation, and discover that you had finished "Protecting the Lion", and were already on chapter 18 of "Strings Attached". I could hardly believe it! You finished up "Protecting the Lion" so well, I was delighted to see that you had started a sequel.

Now, about what I read so far in the sequel, and have concluded at the end of chapter eighteen:
1) I hate Rinoa
2) Kiros is irritating me
3) Seifer makes me smile
4) I love Gabriel
5) I hate Rinoa
6) I love Selphie
7) I hate Rinoa
8) I want something horrible to happen to Rinoa


I can't wait until your next up to see what is going to happen next; so update soon. Please. ^_^ By the way, is Gabriel, like, a human that can change into a cat? Random question and thought I know, but I was just so curious...

Keep up the excellent work!

Love,
Layla