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love it, i love the character developments and your writing itself. it's rare to come by. great read. nothing negative at all, just pity there weren't more action, haha.

This was an excellent story, as many reviewers have stated, but I found myself having trouble figuring out when in the game this story took place. After finishing the story, I would like to suggest that you put up an AU warning to keep readers from being too confused.

I loved this story and I love all of your Squall/Seifer stories. You're an extremely talented writer with a knack for interesting plot lines. I love the fact that you bring romance to your stories instead of just sex. Kudos and please keep up the writing.

Great story. I've read a few Cloud/Vincent fics but you had a great take on the whole story. I really liked your psychological conditioning that Hojo put Vincent through. It was both very origional and fit great with the character. You also did an amazing job with details and character development. Great story!

This is agreit story !! Frankly I don't anderstand
whay you got so feu reviews.

This was so sweet! It was really quite horrible with all the Vincent stuff and I wanted to rip Hojo apart with my bare hands but the ending was so beautiful. I was at first thinking, oh please let her make a sequel but you finished it so well, i think its good left alone. Unless you have other great ideas for the pair...lol. Either way it was great, no dissapointment from your other stories!
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Jeez... this story was so good!
I was drawn into it at like the first two sentences.
Good job!

I loved it! Very detailed, it gave me a great idea of what was happening. You displayed Vincent's emotions wonderfully, I could picture it perfectly in my mind! Great overall~ Keep it up! =)

I love you!!! this was such a good fic I loved it!! You can believe me or not but I started reading this story at 1A.M and I couldn't stop reading it you got me hooked on this. It's 5:17 A.M! and I'm still awake to leave you a review. Woot! Woot! **gives DB2020 a round of applause and later tackles you to give you a big hug** I really with all honesty no lies enjoyed this story. So I just want to say thank you so much for writing it and posting it. **starts tearing up** (oscar winning line) I just wanna say *sniffle, sniffle* you have touched my heart. I love you! he! he! I know I’m crazy huh! ^-^So anyways it's way past my bed time I don't know how the heck I'm going to wake up in a few hours to go to church. Bleh! such a drag church is! So I guess I'll leave ya! I'll be looking out for any new stories you write. Oh by the way I absolutely loved the end of chapter 12 that was the most cutest thing ever uh! I loved it. Ok well toodles! Love~Teddy Bomber*`

That was a thouroughly enjoyable fiction, thank you so much for writing it :)

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