rate_review Reviews

Geeze. Boy, when you write...you fuckin' write! That was amazing. It was a moving story, the grammar was good, and it flowed nicely with the plots, wrenching out the reader's heart and then giving them something to hope for again. The rapes were a bit too convincing for my taste in reading, and I get the distinct impression that the author has been through maybe something of that nature.

I have got to congradulate you on your ability to look into the mind of a person who blames themselves for things they don't do. Guilt is one of the heaviest indications that a person is a rape victim, and you've done an excellent job delving into the mind of a victim. The ending was good, to say the least, but I honestly expected Vincent to go back to sleep although it probably would have pissed a few people off. I love sad endings. Heh.

You are a magnificent writer, and I would suggest you to maybe write professionally if you could. I was entranced from the first chapter to the last. Bravo. Thank you for such a wonderful story.

Blessed be.
BrucesGirl
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Well i read through the enitre thing. I liked it. ^^ Loved the epilouge Rufus and Tifa being engaged very cute, love Barret's last line to Marlene about her feelign tired, XD That cracked me up. Love Cloud being a horn dog! LOL Okay nice story ^^ I liked it.