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for Punishment and Fate (Finshed)

by Sephanie

schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I understand about the problems. My main problems are occasional dyslexia and forgetfulness. And if you ever want someone to beta who CAN make sense of what you write, I'm here. If I can make sense out of several classmates, my grandmother, and my father try to write--not to mention decipher my grandfather's handwriting--then I can understand what you write. I read this fic, and was impressed. You've done well, and if you want help so that the rest of the world can understand it as well, then I will be happy to help. You can contact me at wolf.kin.flight@gmail.com or winds_of_nocte@yahoo.com
person vivarose
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...an interesting ending, definitely not the one I would've foreseen.
person FullMetalBlunt
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I have read this and the second one. I really, really like it. It is so original and so out of the norm...
Mmm and Vincent as an evil sex vampire, heh, you just made my day. Usually I don't go for Cloud stories, but I loved this one. Even at work yesterday I was reading the this story on my cell phone. ^_^ Thank you for this wonderful piece of art.
person kissychan1101
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if you have issues with writing and reading why not enlist the help of a beta? otherwise not too shabby. keep it up.

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