rate_review Reviews

hmm. . . what to say. . . well, it's kind of cunfusing, what I'm going to say that is, but I love and yet hate this fic at the same time. Don't get me wrong, it's good and everthing, but I don't know, there's just something about it that makes my mind think "stop reading," although I can't.

Anyway, your writing has greatly improved from before, and I did like reading through this and the first story. I'll be looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

My, this has become very intriguing indeed. Your writing has also improved significantly since the first few chapters. Keep up the good work and update soon, please!
Hugs,
Ly

Much better ^__^ Ty!

I love the story but do you think you could space out the dilong more. It's so hard to read.

Cloud/Reno is just so damn hot. I wonder where you'll take this.
Keep writing!