rate_review Reviews

May I just say that your story is awesome. I'm a big fan of Rikku/Yuna fics. I'm working on starting up my own fanfic page (www.myspace.com/wantshentai) (I mostly used myspace for the free domain and web space) anyway, I was hoping I could post your story on the site. I plan to include proper citation (MLA Format) and give you credit. Shoot me an e-mail if that's okay with you. (wantshentai@yahoo.com) Thanks!

Wow, loved the story. I really like the rikku/yuna pairing. Actually, I like the Rikku/anyone pairing, but in particular rikku/yuna. Awesome story. I'm working on starting up my own fanfic page (www.myspace.com/wantshentai) (I mostly used myspace for the free domain and web space) anyway, I was hoping I could post your story on the site. I plan to include proper citation (MLA) and give you credit. Shoot me an e-mail if that's okay with you. (wantshentai@yahoo.com) Thanks!

nya, too short, it had great potential, and very good writing, but try goign a litttle longer in with the sex :P other then that your writing style is very good

It's not bad, but it did not make my day any brighter either..
You should try to find a better word to describe her breasts than "perfect"... it's SO overused..
The word doesn't feel quite right either... and well, u could have done a way nicer suduction scene at the beach.. or anywhere...
But hey, not that bad for a first fic.

I don't know why you are so uptight. It's a great story, quick and to the point. Good character choice. ^_-

Yeah, uh, they actually ARE cousins. You can't just instantly wave a magic wand and change what is solid fact. If you've got a problem cousincest (and you shouldn't; it's morally, legally, and genetically sound), then you should probably try writing a lemon about people who...aren't cousins.