rate_review Reviews

Another lovely work. You managed to catch their personality rather well. They're awfully unhappy, aren't they?

On to the next! Must find out what happens!

You do know that I love this series, right? The first one was absolutely perfect, and his second installment wasn't a disappointment. I'm so glad you're writing this! The characterizations are SO Cloud and Vincent, if a little more on the solemn side. It fits them so perfectly since they're the self abusive/guilt ridden type, and I hadn't realized how good Cloud and Vincent paired up until you wrote this.

So keep up the good work! I look forward to your next update!

Another great chapte, gosh i love how you write and this one was just as good! I was so sad th eending gosh that touched me! Boo i was sad for both Vincent and Cloud. T_T But still this story was enjoyable. Great job.^^

Sequel. Now. j/k

XD Very nice!