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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Details are great. I find them simple and direct. I'm also enjoying how well the story flows. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing bad enough that it makes it difficult to read. Anyway, hope you update soon 'cause this is very intriguing. :D
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gasp! Cid and Cloud! wow is this going to later on turn to a threesome? XD Anyways thought it was cute the way cloud was blushing and acting while talking to Cid. =p
And poor Vincent, T_T he is hurting! He must realize he is nice to look at indeed and he needs some loving! I cannot wait for the next chapter. update soon!!!
And poor Vincent, T_T he is hurting! He must realize he is nice to look at indeed and he needs some loving! I cannot wait for the next chapter. update soon!!!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes that was good. more more ;)
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the wey you write Cid
Keep up the good work ;)
Keep up the good work ;)
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're good, probably better than you give yourself credit for. Shera's message has disappeared--those brackets are taken as code, I think, so you should maybe use a different symbol around electronic messages.
I look forward to updates on this one. Thanks for a pleasant while spent with old friends. : )
I look forward to updates on this one. Thanks for a pleasant while spent with old friends. : )
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg...you made me love cidxvin *glomps* update soon please
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I vote for Vincent rape! Know why? I know Vincent is a seme, but I don't like any of the vincent/uke pairings, and I don't think he'd willing let Cid have him, so, Vincent rape. *nods* Yep. It'd be hot too. I realized the other day, vincent makes a good uke even though he's seme, if that makes sence. Like, he acts seme, but he's uke when it comes to the lovely lemon. Yes. Most certainly Vincent rape. I'll give you a cookie! :D
~killyjoy
~killyjoy
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I hope you update soon! I love it! I figured it out! Tifa and Shera are afraid that Vinny is going to be taking Cloud and Cid from them! Damn them! I hope they don't succeed. Awesome story! Luff it!
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this, it's very amusing with the way you've done Tifa and Shera. Vincent really needs to look in a mirror, very soon. Then he would understand the stares. Please update!!!
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amusing and interesting. please continue!