rate_review Reviews

that took a turn...but i like it. well done :)

Very sweet ending. Loved it. Can't wait to read more from you. A sequel perhaps? Please!!!

I think you're an excellent writer. I like the fic, and while the theme of Rufus being obsessive and violent is slightly overused, I would just like to point out that you've done a wonderful job as an author to describe his tendencies and you've made it interesting for the reader.

Don't let the jerk off flamers get to you. Final Fantasy 7 is a notoriously hard game to write. People like FF so much that they nitpick the new writers to death. Flamers are viscious here. Don't let them bug you. Far more people like your work and want you to continue it. I know I do!

I'm really glad you continued to write. I hope you write more stories after this one.

Don't give up writing fanfiction, you're much too talented for that. And why would you care about the rant? It's obviously by a bunch of Rufus fans who don't want to see him do evil. I don't care, I had fun with your fic. You probably could have continued it by making Cloud escape, Rufus come after him and a few more discipline sessions after he got caught.

http://community.livejournal.com/fanficrants/3184290.html

Here you go.

No! Why did you have to stop it was getting really good! Oh I hate people that flame stories!!! I got flamed on a story I did and I couldn't write for a year! I'm sorry if those dumb people were mean and thank you for at least putting up the third chapter... It was really cute. And thought it doesn't seem to help now, I thought your story was good.

Hiya!!! Oh, please don't end this story!!! I love it. I've haven't seen many Rufus and Cloud stories and I love this pairing. I love the master/pet relationship. It reminds me of Iason and Riki from Ai no Kusabi. Please write more as I really want to know how it ends. Just ignore the bashers, there are people who really like your story. Byebye!! *licks*

Okay here, princess, just hear me out for a minute.

Don't put yourself down just because people are too lazy to review. God knows, I'm bad like that because I don't even review the stories that I like. But it makes me sad to see kids like you get upset over something like that.

Your story has a lot of potential. Personally, I'd like to see a bit more detail, but overall, good idea. Interesting au, and a couple I actually like.

So there you are. I'll try to be more thorough. And give you a better review when I'm not blasted off my ass.

nuuuuuuuu there needs to be more Cloud and Rufus fics! it'll be one heck of a shame if you never post again ... well, Ill be waiting to see any more of your fics ... or if you continue this one, Ill love it as much as all the other chappies ;)