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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this is one of the most original stories I've ever read. I could actually see all of that being realistic, though I don't think I've ever gone to a school with both obcenely rich people and dirt poor people, which it seems is what Cloud goes to. Please update.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story, it's a nice twist on FFVII. :) I hope the next chapter comes up soon!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new chapter! I love this fic!!!! And that last chapter ruled!!!! PLease update soon? I really can't wait to see what happpens next!!!!!!
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh! This is so very good! Your grammar and attentiopn to details could use a bit of work, but it was not enough to take away form the overal imapct of the story-besides, I'm not really one to throw stones in that department.....
So....is Cloud going to give our favorite red-head a chance? And what's going on with Hojo? Please update htis story! I have fallen in love with it!
So....is Cloud going to give our favorite red-head a chance? And what's going on with Hojo? Please update htis story! I have fallen in love with it!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Strange. This story reminds me of me and my friends. Vincent really reminds me of my 'brother' Leon. It's a great story so far. Write more! And, I don't really care that they act out of character, that gets kind of boring after a while anyway, right?
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo love the story I was sceptical at first about it taking place in New York and how ShinRa would fit in our would but WOW! It's perfect I can't wait to read the rest, I don't know how you feel about RenoXRufus but I posted Shinra Inc. on here check it out and tell me what you think and keep up the good work XO XD XP X3...
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Reno and Cloud are gonna do it. >.>
andandand there's gonna be a present.....
...andand...it's gonna be a watch. o.O'
xD yush i basically know what happens cuz i went to fanfiction.com and looked it up :D
Great story, sad what happens. Fucking Rufus. >.<
andandand there's gonna be a present.....
...andand...it's gonna be a watch. o.O'
xD yush i basically know what happens cuz i went to fanfiction.com and looked it up :D
Great story, sad what happens. Fucking Rufus. >.<
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.....ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!! xD
ps: Reno is a stalker? o.O'
ps: Reno is a stalker? o.O'
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
xD yay! you updated the same day! Go you :D
>.>......yes i am hyper...heh xDDDDDDDD
>.>......yes i am hyper...heh xDDDDDDDD
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
._. So, you had already writen this before?
You have copies? .....'>.> The only thing wrong with this fic is that the chapters are too short. -P.A
You have copies? .....'>.> The only thing wrong with this fic is that the chapters are too short. -P.A