rate_review Reviews

I’m gonna be honest and very blunt. I was reading this fic at FF.net and this is by far the worse characterization of Cloud and Reno I’ve ever seen. Cloud is completely OOC. I know it’s an AU, but he is to the point where he’s not Cloud. Cloud sounds like he belongs on the movie Clueless. I like the fact you have Cloud more in the seme role since I prefer it that way myself, but the characterization makes this not enjoyable.

You’re a good writer, but you should have stick with OC’s on this one, my Dear, because this is what they sound like to me. Reno’s not horribly bad. Cloud’s just- I can’t go on. It would be too long of a review. Once again, this is not a flame but one writer to another. Please work on your characterization. If you have not played the game, do some research first before you start to write these characters.

Goodluck and keep writing.

Well, I think this story just revealed itself quite nicely.
The characters seem well placed, even though rufus sound a little OOC he still seems well places in this. Lol, Ummm..keep up the great work. -P.A

I read your story before it dissapeared for a while because you had not been 18 yet. And it was amazing; I was looking forward to reading this again, and I remember now how funny it was.
I love your style of humour and even the storyline itself.
This is the best RenoxCloud fic I have ever fucking read. Keep it up!
<3 Anon

I can see this story has potential, but there is really no plot yet.
I will keep a close watch on this story. Update soon. -P.A