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*tackles* I love this fic so very much~! It's so adorable - it leaves a fluffyness in your belly when you read about the brothers' interaction. ^^

Looking forward to the next chapters. :)

Well now! I did not expect to find such a well written fic here! There is a greater age difference between Weiss and Nero here than in other fics, but somehow it worked without being cute shota, which is absolutely horrible.

There are spelling mistakes, the kind that Word doesn't look for. For example head was misspelled thread, that sort of mistake. Otherwise, your plot moves quickly, yet does not rush, and your charachters are very believable. I like your descriptions, and how there are good explanations for phenomenon - like Nero's tattoos, and why all the Tsviets look up at Weiss in Dirge of Cerberus.

Great job, and I will watch for your updates.

Wow... absolutely amazing!!!!!!!! I adore your story!!!! It's so amazing!!!!!!! Nero and Weiss make such a cute couple, ne? I honestly can't convey how super, amazingly, fantastic this story is!!!!! Yes... I used those words... forgive me as I revert back to the age of 9. Now, I think it is time for some artwork for this story you have here... when it is finished, I shall email you a copy! It might take a while though... sorry! I'm a bit of a slow artist. But it will be done! I can't wait for your next update, so don't take too long!!!
See ya!

THIS STORY IS JUST SO AWESOME!! You are a great writer and PLEASE!! continue it I'm so looking forward to it!! Wai!!! SO CUTE ENDING FOR CHAPPIE SEVEN!! WAII!!!! I JUST WANT TO DRAW SCENES FROM YOUR FIC LIKE THERE'S NO TOMORROW
ok, rabid fangirl here xDUU
PLZ CONTINUE IT!!! TOT!

Well this story has made a believer out of me!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. The ending was so sweet! Don't apologize, I love mushy stuff like that ^_^ I have to agree with everyone else, this chapter was well worth the wait, I think I have to go clean up the blood from the induced nosebleed now ;)

Not a fanart, but a haiku for you:

Juxtiposition
between the shadow and light
their pure love prevails.

Heh, and I'm glad you can't look at the snack aisle the same way again, my work here is done! *evil grin*

And last but not least, please write more!

*Dies of the cuteness and romantic aspects of this chapter*

I loved this chapter. This was simply fanservice and I loved it. Finally, FINALLY! They have a nice hot moment together. All the building up for the kissing and touching, to this awesome chapter. Bravo...I can't wait to see more. To see them interact...and then come across with problems

WooT! Beautiful story!
I love the character development. It's always good when a writers establish the characters, before lunging into the sex scenes.

Loved this chapter.
I was half expecting Restrictor to walk in on Weiss and Nero. I wonder how he'd react?!
I'm glad he didn't though. Wouldn't want to ruin Weiss and Nero's first time.
(I love Nero's innocence by the way)

Restrictor is a great baddie. He makes Hojo look like a nice old man. XD
Can't wait for future chapters! Well done!

Forgot to add ...

Nero spoke!! SQUEE!!!!

^_^

Yes yes yesss! The time has come! They finally became one (ha, a poet and didn't know it)! That chapter just made my month. Christmas came early! Yay! Santa brought smut! But seriously, I am loving it. And thankies for the blurb at the top! I feel loved! Talk about an ego boost, I'm so happy that you got to see my fan art! Your fan fic was so inspiring I just had to illustrate it. Please keep it up!