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by LemonLimeCrush

person Fayore
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh finally, someone fills in the gap of storyline that Dirge left us with. Maybe the DoC writters should have looked at your work, wouldnt have minded some yaoi shown in the game=)

Well, I read the chapters so far (a bit peeved where you placed a cliff hanger, but the idea of an entire chapter of smut appeals to me) and gotta say, best Weiss x Nero Ive found. Course, the other stories you have written are fine as well but call me a sucker for a storyline^~

Unfortunently I can totally see the Restrictor raping Nero based on the foreshadowing(or what I think is foreshadowing) or fortunently for some. Whatever floats your boat. But please, if I may ask for this, avoid Hojo x Weiss o_o -takes a moment to shudder- Sorry, those images of such a nasty... nasty... nasty... ugly... nasty yet again... icky... old guy... blegh. Blegh. Appologies to the Hojo fans (though they are far and few Im sure someone is into the guy)but hey, he made Weiss jam his hand through Nero. Thats not easily forgiven.

Ack, I went on a slight rant. Anyways, I await eagerly for the next chapter. Bring on the incest yaoi!

Ps: Ever notice Nero is like the moon and Weiss the sun?
person Rinchans-flower
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another...really, really wonderful chapter. I think the best was the end of the chapter, FINALLY! Something so...good between the two. It was a really great build up, each chapter made me want to see more and more interaction between the two. And now finally they get it! I'm so happy! But the Restrictor makes me sad, no! You can't touch Nero!
person Brittny
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I'm not going to hurt you. I finally learned that patience is virtue. :D
You wrote the scene so well that I could almost feel their passion radiating from my laptop. I need to read the next chapter in a nice, quiet corner...
Excellent job on your writing.
person Schala-Kitty
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I waited until I had read everything posted thus far before commenting. First of all, I absolutely adore that you're using the Multiplayer Mode as a background. Far too few English-speaking fans are unaware of it, which is a crying shame because I found it far more interesting than DoC's main storyline.

Secondly, I am awaiting more Weiss/Nero with bated breath. I have adored this couple since I discovered it on Japanese fanart sites. However, I am entirely floored by your wonderful presentation of it and can only hope for more. Those tantalizing glimpses into Weiss's dirty thoughts have left me as hot, bothered, and ultimately wanting as him....
person Redemption
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fanfiction. Weiss/Nero is so cute, lmao.
Keep it up, I'm loving the story D: <3
person Brittny
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man...I'm supposed to be doing my gawd awful homework, but instead I'm sitting here enthralled by Silhouette. Oh well, it doesn't hurt to slack off sometimes. I love it, love it, LOVE it! I wish I had some popcorn while reading this story.
Restrictor made me remember my old, evil high school teacher (who I shall not name). They are probably related in some parallel universe.
And I like how you portray the growing relationship between Weiss and Nero. Every time I read each chapter, I go, "Will they have sex?" *blink blik* However, I realize that rushing into things takes the fun away. :(
So yeah like...I'm waiting for the next chapter. ^_~
person snickers supreme
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOO.....MMMMM.....GGGGG!!!! i cant wait for more! your soo good, your grammer and spelling are better too!! *hugs*
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Gasp) This last chapter is so cute! I love how they are bonding and cuddling! (squee!) I feel sick for them though, Resistritor is such a bastard. I'm kind of scared for them since you said you were thinking of doing horrible things to them... or maybe you were talking about good horrible things?

The materia idea was a good one. Little Nero is as Weiss said, a clever boy. Hehe! At least Weiss finally gets to see him now. I hope Nero will talk soon... boy thing.
person Mad March
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work, yet again! One of my friends was home sick today so I decided to read "Silhouette" to her and I can truly say it made her day. She loved snarky Weiss...and started laughing whenever Hojo was around(but that might have been because of my impression of his english VA...*snickers*). The entire story was gradually turning her into a pile of happily giggling mush, but Chapter 5 really did her in I must say. ^_^ Thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to brighten up her day just a little bit.

Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Things just keep getting better and better... X3

person lunatic_vn
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very fast! >_<
I think maybe you're already tried to hear this but, good chapter! Again those interactions between Weiss and Nero are sweet, love them so much. And I like how you keep the story,not too fast yet neither slow. Another spell check, you misspelled 'Tsviets'once but screw them since it's not really important. And I have to admit, this chapter's cliffhanger is crueler than usual. Well, it's not until you mentioned what are waiting for us in the next one. XD

P.S. To mazda019-san. Sorry to not reply you sooner since I just saw your comment. I found those dojins for sell in a couple of Japanese fansite. Too bad I can't order them since I don't have any Japanese account. T^T

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