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Well... it seems from my point of view that reviewing=update... so I shall do so again! :) And yes, I shall do so after I already e-mailed you. I'm strange like that. Oh and before I get to my gushing, I did find one tiny grammar thing. "She new her invention". New should be knew, I think. Just something to check.

And by the Planet, you still win at life for this fic! I am quite litterally obsessed with it, as shown by the fact that I stomached the Scarlet appearence... I hate her so much *shudders* though not as much as Hojo. But then, I don't think I could hate anyone as much as him...

But update update update! I want more! *grins* And I'm still awed over how well you write your characterizations... flawless...

hugs,
Rio

Oh my.... you so very much win at life for this fic! I... I can't even describe how much I love your portrayal of the Weiss/Nero pairing! All throughout DoC I was like "yay! brotherly slash and it's practically cannon!" and you portrayed them so cannonly and perfectly! It's more than beautiful... but I'm gushing. I appologize for the gushing.

Normally at this point I recomened something for editing, to give a well-rounded review you know and not have it be just pure *gush* as to how much I love you because of this fic... but I really can't find anything. You kept them in character, and I don't see anything grammatical but I'm horrible at that. The only problem as far as I can see is that there are only two chapters!

So *when* will the next one be out? And can I hound you for it if it doens't come out soon?

hugs!
Rio

Holy F***!!! I love this very much.(It's just my own twist and sadism mind that love to see my belove charecters being tortured. :P)You did combine both canon fact and your own imagination together very well.Damn those cruel chifhanger.(T_T)Can't wait to see more of this peice.But you know?,I'd love it even more if you write those chaper longer.(I just can't get enough of it, I guess. :P)

Wonderful piece of work! I like your writing style, everything floats so smoothly(uh...uh my english is bad I know >_>;;) Aaah Weiss x Nero I can´t wait for the smut! ^_^;;; I hope to see an update soon =)

This is one of my favorite fanfictions now...I can't wait to see more!

Wow, I loved this fic so much... It just captures Weiss so well and the powers of Nero. I really hope you add more soon, because now I'm addicted to this one! Hojo is a total jerk, like normal... There is really nothing I disliked about this, in fact I could really invision everything you described; the way you write is easy for me to see in my head.

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!1
More more more more MORE!!!
I've checked to see if this fanfic has been updated twice a day since I first reviewed it! ((Sorryy if that's creepy...))
But... but... CLIFFHANGER!!! I LOVES YOUR FANFIC SO MUCH!!! WHY DO YOU TORMENT ME!?
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But I can wait <3
Keep up the awesome work!!!!
~Sam

cant wait for more!

This is definately the start of something wonderful!

I think you've done a wonderful job at keeping the story canon so far, tying in what's known from DoC and developing the ideas in your own way. I especially like the part where the idea of a having a brother permeates into Weiss's thoughts, it was supurbly wrought.

There are a few typos here and there, but I'm sure they will be fixed soon, I like your writing style overall as well but I have to say, you're making me feel guilty for being a scientist! Too bad my experiments don't involve creating yummy guys.

Please keep writing, I am eagerly awaiting more!

Liking what you're doing with it thus far. ^^ Keep it up.