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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok i finished the fanart
its colored now YAY!!
and i read this story like a dozen times
its sooo awsome!!!
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54513151/ <~~~~the ART!!!
its colored now YAY!!
and i read this story like a dozen times
its sooo awsome!!!
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54513151/ <~~~~the ART!!!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story and i made a fan art to it after i finnished it its not colored but im going to try and color it w/ color pincels, i wish i had a tablet TT-TT
oh and i did buy some oreos and then i read the story gah!! i loved it i looked at oreos different now ?-?
any way please please please wirte more stories like that i love bondage i cant write to save my life
oh the fanart is at deviantart.com look for psycokittysamurai
oh and I LOVE YOUR STORIES^__^
oh and i did buy some oreos and then i read the story gah!! i loved it i looked at oreos different now ?-?
any way please please please wirte more stories like that i love bondage i cant write to save my life
oh the fanart is at deviantart.com look for psycokittysamurai
oh and I LOVE YOUR STORIES^__^
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*enjoyed this immensely* Very well written, especially the sex. xD *re-reads* Mmm...nummy....
Glad to see another Weiss/Nero fic. There are hardly any on here. D: I should probably write one when I get all this other crap finished. >.>;
Anywho, looking forward to more in the future. :3
Glad to see another Weiss/Nero fic. There are hardly any on here. D: I should probably write one when I get all this other crap finished. >.>;
Anywho, looking forward to more in the future. :3
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? I've been putting off reviewing for this for waaay too long. God I love this story. I think I read this one right after I wrote my own lemon and I was so totally blown away by it (and totally embarassed about my story afterwards).
Maybe I'm just a pervert - but I completely love this story soooo much that I read it a little too often. It really got me anchored into the whole WeissXNero pairing.
You convey emotion really well. They really love each other and it shows (even if they are rough hehe). I think someone mentioned you use the same words a lot - I noticed it too - but I am totally guilty of doing that on more than one occassion (like in almost everything I write hehe).
Anyways - before I turn this into an essay I really loved it and I wanted to review for it. Good job! =D
Maybe I'm just a pervert - but I completely love this story soooo much that I read it a little too often. It really got me anchored into the whole WeissXNero pairing.
You convey emotion really well. They really love each other and it shows (even if they are rough hehe). I think someone mentioned you use the same words a lot - I noticed it too - but I am totally guilty of doing that on more than one occassion (like in almost everything I write hehe).
Anyways - before I turn this into an essay I really loved it and I wanted to review for it. Good job! =D
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read any other reviews for this piece, so I'll probably just be repeating the exact same things everyone else said. Still, after a beautiful story like that, how could I not do you one the simple favor you asked for? I shall now, to the best of my ability, review.
First of all, even despite the lack of beta-ing, it is marvellously written. Gramatically, your only slight problems were run-on sentences and keeping the verb tense in line. But...I actually had to read it twice to catch all of the mistakes, because the first time I read it I was rocking in my chair, eyes superglued to every word on the screen. The pace and flow of the story was beautiful - much better than a whole lot of stories I've read here, no offense to other authors here. You have great word choice, and it pays off in the most erotic way. Your characterization was great, too. I've played through DoC twice now, and your depiction of these two seemed to hit the nail on the head, as they say. There's extra credit right there: they had great, hot sex AND you kept them in character - canon, even, seeing as there were plenty of hints that the two loved each other, even if it didn't go so far as to suggest they were lovers. And there didn't have to be a plot at all, since this was a PWP, but it still fit into the main story really well.
"Shatter" is definitely one of the best PWP's that I have ever had the joy of reading. My hat's off to you, my fellow author. Thank you.
First of all, even despite the lack of beta-ing, it is marvellously written. Gramatically, your only slight problems were run-on sentences and keeping the verb tense in line. But...I actually had to read it twice to catch all of the mistakes, because the first time I read it I was rocking in my chair, eyes superglued to every word on the screen. The pace and flow of the story was beautiful - much better than a whole lot of stories I've read here, no offense to other authors here. You have great word choice, and it pays off in the most erotic way. Your characterization was great, too. I've played through DoC twice now, and your depiction of these two seemed to hit the nail on the head, as they say. There's extra credit right there: they had great, hot sex AND you kept them in character - canon, even, seeing as there were plenty of hints that the two loved each other, even if it didn't go so far as to suggest they were lovers. And there didn't have to be a plot at all, since this was a PWP, but it still fit into the main story really well.
"Shatter" is definitely one of the best PWP's that I have ever had the joy of reading. My hat's off to you, my fellow author. Thank you.
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is fantastic! Why have I not discovered this sooner?
Loved this story and your other works.
Loved this story and your other works.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hei, I usually don't review (can you believe it, I'm too SHY to), but I felt that this one especially deserved one! I love bondage and such, especially between two guys that could be described as both semes, so this was great to see. I loved the role reversal and the sudden switch at the end, great! :) I like your method of writing.
Anikky.
Anikky.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW,what the hot kinky sex screen.(Not be able to have any word to descripe this story better than this.) Adore your writing style very much, so danm smooth yet twisted exciting.This's now the longest sex-making sene I've ever read.And you beat that last one quite badly in quality. It's hard to have a long but interesting for read to the end One-shot. But if it's only my stupid feeling that I think some words were used a little too much ?(then it must because the story lengh.)Love to see more...WeissxNero forever!!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. That was amazing! I love your writing style! And the characters, the romance, everything was just perfect from you! Another winning fanfic I see... must *twitch* write *twitch* more....
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, is it hot in here or what?!
Wonderful story LL Crush, keep up the great work. I am definitely looking forward to reading more from you.
I have to say I was in love with this pairing the very first time I saw them and you’ve done a magnificent job at bringing the characters to life (in the best way possible of course)! I especially enjoyed the power dynamic that comes through with Nero and Weiss and how that dynamic changes throughout the story. There were some twists in there that I totally wasn’t expecting.
Your prose is well constructed, the story flows very smoothly. There are a few places which need a bit of work, but to be honest for a piece this long I didn’t even find them that distracting and I know you’ll fix them up soon :)
For anyone who hasn’t read this story yet, what are you waiting for? Go GO!
Wonderful story LL Crush, keep up the great work. I am definitely looking forward to reading more from you.
I have to say I was in love with this pairing the very first time I saw them and you’ve done a magnificent job at bringing the characters to life (in the best way possible of course)! I especially enjoyed the power dynamic that comes through with Nero and Weiss and how that dynamic changes throughout the story. There were some twists in there that I totally wasn’t expecting.
Your prose is well constructed, the story flows very smoothly. There are a few places which need a bit of work, but to be honest for a piece this long I didn’t even find them that distracting and I know you’ll fix them up soon :)
For anyone who hasn’t read this story yet, what are you waiting for? Go GO!