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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...huh...
That was rather interesting...
That was rather interesting...
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sexy
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, cute.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Cloud will endure this.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing, i think your story is great the way it is.
Cloud whore is awesome
POOONNN TIME!! XD
Cloud whore is awesome
POOONNN TIME!! XD
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm just writing to encourage you to keep expressing your ideas. If anyone tells you NOT to write, ignore them. I'm still reading your stuff and I will read whatever you write in the future. :) Keep it up!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahha, love it.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting ^^
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Story certainly has some potential. But work on the build of sentences and more importantly, punctuation!
Also, the story is kind of straight in the face. Perhaps a little subtlety can be used.
If you're going to post more chapters, don't forget to give some background info on the characters, or atleast small hints to the character's past.
Good luck.
Also, the story is kind of straight in the face. Perhaps a little subtlety can be used.
If you're going to post more chapters, don't forget to give some background info on the characters, or atleast small hints to the character's past.
Good luck.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FRIGGIN SWEET!!!!!!