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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...man I wish I was at that club.....
nice job...
nice job...
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the best FanFics I've ever read.
There's the characters with their development. Their own personalities clash and crash into each other, making it all very interesting.
The action, well-placed, the detailed plot, the right idea written in the right way. Amazing.
The sex part, detailed, and yet, un-detailed. It was something I understood very well without feeling like I'm reading some sort of cheap, annoying, bothering details. I usually don't read the details unless I'm interested in the FanFic ~ and this one got me interesetd right from the start.
What else is there to comment upon? The style? Well, I have to hand it to ya ~ I loved your style. It wasn't all sex, like other FanFics I've seen. This one had style, had manners, had a way on getting the attention ~ not through vulgarity, but through the obscure setting and the macabre [hah! speaking of macabre! ~ that title of yours has to be the best title i've see] atmosphere of it all.
Overall, I think it was not a waste of time *like some FanFics here proved to be*, but I enjoyed it from the first sentence, right through the ending [which, btw, was very very good, and surprisingly fitting for the story].
And I wanna see a sequel ~ I really wanna. [I'll help you with it if it's any better >___> *feels like writing*]
There's the characters with their development. Their own personalities clash and crash into each other, making it all very interesting.
The action, well-placed, the detailed plot, the right idea written in the right way. Amazing.
The sex part, detailed, and yet, un-detailed. It was something I understood very well without feeling like I'm reading some sort of cheap, annoying, bothering details. I usually don't read the details unless I'm interested in the FanFic ~ and this one got me interesetd right from the start.
What else is there to comment upon? The style? Well, I have to hand it to ya ~ I loved your style. It wasn't all sex, like other FanFics I've seen. This one had style, had manners, had a way on getting the attention ~ not through vulgarity, but through the obscure setting and the macabre [hah! speaking of macabre! ~ that title of yours has to be the best title i've see] atmosphere of it all.
Overall, I think it was not a waste of time *like some FanFics here proved to be*, but I enjoyed it from the first sentence, right through the ending [which, btw, was very very good, and surprisingly fitting for the story].
And I wanna see a sequel ~ I really wanna. [I'll help you with it if it's any better >___> *feels like writing*]
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another hot little piece.Love how you make a different but yet familiar between their relative in the canon and this AU story.Poor Weiss, didn't stand a chance to resist Nero's emotinal eyes.(Well,in that situation, I couden't either. XD)I'm very curious how you will continue this now.
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@.@ can't believe nobody's reviewed yet!!
this story was amazing! weiss and nero are so hot together!!!
this story was amazing! weiss and nero are so hot together!!!
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Another amazing Weiss and Nero fic! I will probably never be able to go dancing with a completely straight face again. Very hot!
I would definately like to see a continuation to this story, maybe have Weiss teach Nero something? hee hee
Keep up the great work!
I would definately like to see a continuation to this story, maybe have Weiss teach Nero something? hee hee
Keep up the great work!
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I just beat Dirge, and I'm in love with Weiss/Nero. I think you're the first author I've found who's writen them. I hope you do a second one for this. I can't wait to see updates on your other fics as well! Keep writing!