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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful! ^_^ Finally, some realistic sex between virgins. =) Very romantic and in character.
Keep up the good work! :D
Keep up the good work! :D
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff there! Very in character and impressive! Me loves!
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on another awesome fic! They're so cute, and you did a really good job describing their first time -- not perfect, but beautiful despite and because of its imperfection.
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG.
Wow, that was amazing. :D. Excellently done! Wonderful descriptions for their first time. Absolutely wonderful!!
Keep on writing!!
Wow, that was amazing. :D. Excellently done! Wonderful descriptions for their first time. Absolutely wonderful!!
Keep on writing!!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's not too bad. However, there are grammatical errors throughout the story that should be corrected, as well as a few words mistaken for something else. I would suggest using spell check to fix these problems. Other than that, it's a very likely story.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a fantastic lemon!
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not half bad. I'm not a fan of Rinoa, and have an even bigger hatred for het - picky about how women are portrayed and all...
But, this was an enjoyable read. Good job!
But, this was an enjoyable read. Good job!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing something realistic, it's a lost art really, expressing the awkwardness that is real sex rather than some idealistic fantasy.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet. I love RinoaXSquall fics, and you did a good job with this.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WEll...it was smutty, but at least it was nicely written smut (giggles). I am not a Rinoa/Squall fan but I can say what you wrote was both tasteful and more realistic than other exaggerated stories I have read on this site.