rate_review Reviews

Aww, poor Squall! Having his notebook stolen by such a humongous assbag like Seifer. All well, at least he got some good sex out of the deal.

Though slightly juvenile, it was well-written. You potray Seifer well, but you seem to struggle slightly with Squall's personality. He probably wouldn't write that type of thing down at all. All in all, it was a nice read.

Bagel

Im not sure that I like the ending but that could come from my deep hatred of one-shots, but it was really good all the same! it was really funny how you explored a crueler but cooler seifer, lol. I dont know how to compliment but just to say it was GREAT. I had a good read.
- i dont have a name so i just sign with my email - anime_obsessed_lover@hotmail.com

Hi, me again (anime_obsessed_lover@hotmail.com) *smiling impishly* THIS ISNT A ONE-SHOT!? i thought it was...*gives an embaressed smile* Update soon please!

I like it. I was a little iffy about the notebook, thinking maybe it'd make Squall look like a pansy or something, but it came out nice. I loo forward to more.