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great chapter, i cant believe no one reviews this fic its great. do vincent and cloud like tifa?

This was a good chapter bit short though...well not really, I just want to see more, great fic though hope to see more soon

>:) heheheehee oh yes. Things are about to get interesting. Muahahahaha! ahem...More please. :D I like this story.

Great chaper, haha yazoo the peeing tom, i know you just did but update quickly

Excellent story so far, I am anxiously awaiting more!

wow!! i'm totally hooked since i haven't read tifa in an angle like yours it was very nicely done. some simple errors were forgiven but thats understandable. please update soon!!! i'll give it a perfect score!

Why doesn't this story have more reviews??? Oh well, I'll put words here in place of everyone else who reads it, whacks off, then leaves without a word... (ungrateful punks)

You did good, but you hit the enter key WAY too much. You don't need THAT many seperate paragraphs, otherwise it just stretches it and makes it hard to read. In some cases it's good for making certain points, like thoughts, but for the most part, you really should try getting to at LEAST four sentences before creating a new paragraph, that's all I'm saying. Plus there's quite a few punctuation errors throughout.

Nitpicking aside, the plot is delicious. It's like...it's like crag leg meat dipped in garlic butter, it's THAT good. I like the whole hint of mystery you had going on with who she was screwing. That deserves MAD props. It leads up to a lot of speculation and possibilities, which is terrific.

Perhaps a bit more detail on the sex scene...or detail in general. That could use some work.

Overall, very good. 4 out of 5 stars.

I agree this is a very good start.
And it's good to see Yazoo screwing someone besides one of his brothers.

this was a great fic, very well writen. i love tifa paired up with any of the SHM.