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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story reads like a an actual fictional novel with its slow (but necessary) build-up; a rarity on this site - although I'll be the first to admit that there is nothing at all wrong with smut/shorter stories. ^_^
Having read your other stories, I must say that I am very impressed with them and your addictive writing-style.
I am glad to have stumbled upon this story.
Having read your other stories, I must say that I am very impressed with them and your addictive writing-style.
I am glad to have stumbled upon this story.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-tsks- those boys XD They just clash so well, that's what makes this story fantastic you know. ^^ How you're handling their slowly growing relationship is wonderful.
Laguna with Lore was just perfect XD I adored their interaction, I'm curious about Lore's real reaction to what Laguna said last there. XD
Very good job, look forward to the more frequent updates!
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Laguna with Lore was just perfect XD I adored their interaction, I'm curious about Lore's real reaction to what Laguna said last there. XD
Very good job, look forward to the more frequent updates!
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful.
Even if it is a sour ending for this chapter, I loved every word you put in there. The way in which you show all those confusing feeling is amazing. I`m feeling kind of sorry for poor Seifer.... Squall's sincerity is ambiguous but at the same time kind of refreshing.
I really hope to read from you soon!
Even if it is a sour ending for this chapter, I loved every word you put in there. The way in which you show all those confusing feeling is amazing. I`m feeling kind of sorry for poor Seifer.... Squall's sincerity is ambiguous but at the same time kind of refreshing.
I really hope to read from you soon!
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG the head giving scene was amazing! It felt like I was there. And about th ending: Poor Seifer, he just wants Squally's trust. I'm glad Squall is harsh but I can't stand to see Seifer's heart keep getting toyed with. Once again I absolutely adore the way you write Seifer. A masculine man in touch with his feelings who also appreciates good head. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'll be reviewing again!
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!
I jumped outta my chair when I saw that there was an update.
My gosh, I love your style of writing! I can't get enough. In fact, I believe you've gotten Leonhart and Almasy down to such a T, that I can't read many other fanfictions with them in it! They dont seem real in the others.
Seriously, your updates make my month! I can't get enough of your style.
I'll be waiting for the next update like a eager lil puppy.
You have my full support and luck!
Yay!
I jumped outta my chair when I saw that there was an update.
My gosh, I love your style of writing! I can't get enough. In fact, I believe you've gotten Leonhart and Almasy down to such a T, that I can't read many other fanfictions with them in it! They dont seem real in the others.
Seriously, your updates make my month! I can't get enough of your style.
I'll be waiting for the next update like a eager lil puppy.
You have my full support and luck!
Yay!
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Many thanks for the update, I really miss your fic. I´m glad you can have more free time son you can relax and write more ^^. Don´t like how it ended dinner, but I guess is only natural for squall and seifer to fight for anything.
Please update soon. ^^
Please update soon. ^^
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i love you for updating!!!! my heart was totally breaking toward the end for seifer...
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOOOOOOOO!! Thanx for updating!!!!! I love your stories!
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
comon! update already!!
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLease update soon! Don't make me beg. I love this story. I'm addicted, so please hurry, I'm going through withdrawals.